NationStates Jolt Archive


ceramics

Reken
07-03-2005, 14:54
"how about using a force field to protect or men?"asks Someth, secatairy of science.
"nay, it would cost to much time and credits, we need a more simplistic idea. . ." ,states tuscano, " more like a body armor that is easy to move around in yet is strung enough to take serious damage, I Got IT!"
"take this Down!"



starting research of a new way to produce ceramic armor including other substances to make it stronger. we are also looking into genetic alterations of our growing clone army. any imput is welcome.
~the coven of elders
Zepplin Manufacturers
07-03-2005, 15:46
[[OOC hokay I hope you have at least breezed over the stickies if so you will note that this entry has (A)Not been run through a spellchecker and (B)Has nothing to really spur on a readers interest, try some real character interaction, try setting a scene, even just your "Coven of Elders" watching a weapons test video in a presentation or some such, throw in some conversations about your internal politics and you have a passable post.

The lack of actual content is fairly appalling and is the first thing other players will get hit by and as this game is nothing but content it goes down poorly. Re-read the stickies and try again. /OOC]]
Reken
16-03-2005, 19:23
the manny nights of research and testing have finaily proved frutful and the nation is proud to present an ceramic body armor fitted with servos to increase maneuverabality and decrease the strain of weight on the wearer.