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detrimental to the human condition[open|FT]

El Sentiel
13-02-2005, 23:37
The rain poured in the large city of Hilmalk, A small figure dashed across the street towards a building with a sign hanging haphazardly from the wall

“Moonvalley Bar:
Humans only”

The figure knocked on the door three times in rapid succession. The roll of thunder made the figure jump quickly checking his surroundings. The door opened a sliver letting the warmth of light stream out into the cold and dark world. The figure stepped back letting the light cross his face.

“It’s me, now hurry up and open the damned door, it’s pouring out here” The soaking wet man said as the man on the other side of the door fumbled with the locks with his fat sausage like fingers. What seemed like an eternity the door finally opened letting the soaking wet man in.

Pulling the hood off his head revealing the man’s dark tanned baldhead. he looked around at the drunken inhabitants most of them having their privacy walls up to prevent anyone hearing them or hearing around.

“General Mackienze it’s good to have you here, if you’d follow me please” the man from the door walked quickly light a feather despite his heavy frame into a room beside the bar marked “Private”. The air was rank with cigarette smoke; the room was dark with a blue light emitting from the central table. The 2 men and one-woman surround the table was in military uniforms remnants of the original colonies defense force.

“We can’t just out and out attack them you fool, they outnumber us fifteen to one and that’s if! They don’t just turn us into a giant crater from space!” Private Wells barked leaning his back against the table staring at the monitor hung from a wall.

“Well want do you suppose we do magically pull an space armada out of our collective Asses and defeat the ratcat fleet?” the woman retorted coldly staring at the glowing table.

“Well have to get more support not just from the serpent swarm asteroid belt but with the citizens here in Hilmalk Ingrid, most of the people are happy to live under the ratcat patriarch” Corporal wielbirch said his attention fixed on the woman Ingrid “and sarcasm won’t help us either…”

“So I leave for a week and you 3 fall apart at the seams on me?” General Mackienze spoke up catching the 3 soldiers attentions, standing straight.

Ingrid slowly walked over to the general wrapping her arms around his waist resting her head on his shoulder “how was your trip out to the serpent swarm?”

A large portion under General Mackienze’s command thought he and private Ingrid were an item, but he and Ingrid would always deny it. They seemed to have a past of some sort.

“Productive to say the least, here take a look at these” He pulled out a data pad from his rear pocket and tossed it onto the glowing table. Private Wells turned around picking up the pad examining the contents carefully; shock ran across the private’s face as he stuttered to get the words out “6-67-67 Theta tanks! 118 vixen rocket launchers! And 7 armored transports! General where in the serpent swarm did you get all this equipment, the Crime lords?!”

“Actually that’s exactly where I got them from, they seemed quite interested in supporting us, probably to further their own agendas” General Mackienze replied coolly walking around the table slowly “they will be here in a month or two, till then we consolidate our forces, get the locals on our side. “Then we take the city”

That was three months ago and the revolt was in full swing, the colony defense force had managed to take a large portion of Hilmalk pinning most of the Kzinti warriors in the outer skirts of the industrial sector where the fighting was inflicting the most casualties, not just by the two forces but by the volatile materials what surrounded them. Flames and smoke made it impossible to see your foe until you were almost nose-to-nose with him.

Sekrat-General roared furiously as the command transport glided over the hills, his entire command chain had some how been managed to be fitted into a modified troop transport. it was cramp to cramp for any Kzinti to bear for an extended period, he looked back from his seat into the hold where his staff worked constantly even under these abysmal conditions. The radio chatter was unusually light as the only transmissions sent and received were automated ones designed to keep the attack force together so younger hero’s thirsting for honor and a half name did not run off ahead in the foolish thought of attacking the feral monkeys before they were prepared.

Turning his attention to back what was coming his confidence began taking a nosedive as huge plumes of sickening black smoke came from the city. He immediately told the drive to stop at the top of the ridge that surrounds the valley. No sooner than the command transport stopped the ground erupted in a shower of dirt as tank shells whizzed by from in the valley.

Sekrat-General got out of the command transport as fast as he could in his bulky combat armor, they transport was quick but in combat it was better suited as a coffin than a combat vehicle. Bringing his binoculars to his eyes he looked down at the city, even at this distance the zoom provided unparallel giving Sekrat-General a clear view of the small cluster of tanks attempting to make a bee-line up the sloped valley wall towards him.

He cursed under his breath to the One Fanged God. He had not expected the feral monkeys to have armor; monkeys were always full of surprises. He opened the door to the command transport, peeking his head in “open a channel with command, we need armor support immediately”.

He ran on all fours towards the center of the quick response force, 128-kzinti heroes in 16 troop transports; the hero’s were already disembarking which made his task easier. He screamed and spat his orders setting up a defensive position along a jagged rock pile about 50-60 meters away. Their weapons wouldn’t be able to do much damage to the group of tanks but all he had to do was wait for back up to come before the assault on Hilmalk began.
Maniaca
13-02-2005, 23:44
OOC: I have to say this looks pretty cool, and if I understand the title it's an Open RP. I'm not really sure what I'd RP, though, or what the backstory is to this deal. If you want to contact me by TG, or just right here in the thread about that, I'd really appreciate it, 'cause this looks pretty cool, I'm just not sure what I'd do.
Onarr
14-02-2005, 00:51
The Onarrím vessel Macil Saila moved silently throughout the ether, Sages silently reading and analysing the data that came through the neural net and under the scrutiny of their minds. Whispered words and the bellows of war, the cries of dying suns and the joyful murmurs of the birth of a planet, the gently grind of a galaxy upon its axis, and the delightful silence of the astra itself.

A thought went out from one of the Sages and the slender ship dropped out of the Ether and into the True Astra, stealth systems coming on automatically and hiding the Harandorím from prying eyes and searching systems alike. The Macil Saila's weapons hugging close to her sleek black hull, her engines integrated with the stealth systems and giving off no radiation.

Sage Aycinian disconnected himself from the neural net and walked down through the ship to the bridge, long robes swishing as he walked. He nodded politely to the Harandorím who passed him the hallways, who in turn bowed slightly the Sage. Aycinian stepped through the door onto the bridge and bowed to the captain, Tarynth Rose, and made his report quietly to the scion of the House of Rose. Only a few moments later the slender warship banked and moved silently through the True Astra toward the world upon which wartorn Hilmalk stood.
Sskiss
14-02-2005, 00:54
OOC: Tag for reading interest. It would seem El Sentiel is a Larry Niven Fan :)
Central Facehuggeria
14-02-2005, 03:43
#Tag# for alien exterminating interest. Good read too.
El Sentiel
15-02-2005, 03:28
#BUMP# for later posting.
El Sentiel
16-02-2005, 23:56
Sekrat-General’s eyes were fixed on the ridgeline with a predators glare waiting for the inevitable to happen. Clutching his pulse rifle tightly he stared down the barrel looking at the holographic zoom display. Slowly but steadily the low thunder of engines grew into a roaring monster of steal and destruction ascended the ridge. He raised his head a little in shock they stopped, their turrets swinging wildly scanning the horizon for them. He relaxed his body a little watching through his holographic zoom.

The loud crackle of cannon fire quickly removed Sekrat-General’s fear back in full force as the shell exploded far behind the rock pile. The rest of the tank’s turrets slowly turning towards them no matter how bad of accuracy they how, Sekrat-General doubted they would be able to survive a salvo or two. He held his breath his mind racing, thinking or a way to defend these cowardly monkeys in their tin cans, thinking of how he was going to die, with only a half name and no cubs or mates to call his own.

“It seems the One Fanged God wants to test our loyalty brothers, let us prove to him our skill have not dimmed!” he screamed into his headset as he took careful aim, the pulse rifles may not do much but with concentrated fire a spot would slowly rip away at it’s armour.

“That test will have to wait for another hunt” an unknown voice played through Sekrat-General’s headset as 6 kzsiprheras mechs slowly came into view. Spears of light ripped through they air, piercing the armored hull of the tanks followed by missile laden fists hammering down upon the tanks as the 6 kzsiprheras mechs slowly came to a halt a few hundred away from the rock pile.

All that remained of the tank group was smoking hulls with the front ends collapsed in, long scars of metal steel and ceramics painting a tale of horror as the lasers that didn’t manage to cut all the way through the armor sending liquid hot metal droplets flying throughout the cockpit.

In one swift movement Sekrat-General was running on all fours towards the city of Hilmalk, his force quickly following suit. The attack on Hilmalk had begun.
El Sentiel
17-02-2005, 02:17
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