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Shine with Promise (Closed Introductory Fiction)

Jacksonesia
02-02-2005, 22:14
"Democracy is indispensable to Socialism."
Vladimir Ilyich Lenin

Chapter One

02 Feburary 2005
1830 Hours

“Greg-”

“It’s going to pass.”

The Conservative Party Congressman was paused in mid-sentence and looked across the table at his opponent. He was angry, both with the current government because knew the law would pass, and at himself because he knew that the law would pass.

The young-looking twenty six year old sitting opposite the table leaned back comfortably. Geographically, they sat less than two feet from each other across the table, and simply one person moving could change that. Politically, they were miles apart and that was something that would never alter.

Chief of Staff Gregory Donaldson absently brushed dark hair out of his eyes, proudly dusted his Communist Party collar pin and fixed his restored vision on the right-wing politician opposite him. He fixed a grin on his face that had been a resident for most of the day. “It’s going to pass, Jack. It’s going to pass and you know it, and I think you’re pissed because you know it.”

The Long Gallery fell into silence. Outside the windows, across the greenery and down the cliff-face, Nottingham shone in the drawing darkness of the afternoon. To the young Communist looking out across that spectacle, it was invigorating. The town seemed to glow with a brilliance he hadn’t noticed before. ‘Let’s do great things,’ the lights seemed to say.

Donaldson reached forward and grabbed his papers off the table, placing them into his suitcase. Jack stood in protest, trying to keep the man in the room as if it would delay the voting. “Greg-” he began again.

Donaldson grinned at the man again, feeling satisfactory victory. “It’s going to pass, Jack.” He clipped the briefcase locks closed. “It’s going to pass because since yesterday we have a large majority in both the Congress and the Senate, and most importantly,” the man paused as he pulled his coat onto his torso and picked up the ‘case. “Most importantly, it’s going to pass because the people want it.” Turning to the door, he stepped across the plush carpet and away from the dejected Congressman. Calling over his shoulder, Greg finished the conversation. “Tell the Religious right to sit down and take a pill for five years. The Communists are in charge. Gay marriage is going to be legal by the end of the week and there's nothing you can do about it." He paused in the doorway, relishing his next sentence. "If you'll excuse me, I’ve got an Inauguration to go to.”

Greg Donaldson left the room and walked down one of the corridors of Nottingham Castle towards the front door. An aide opened it for him, and Greg stepped out onto the tarmac driveway and towards the Government car that was waiting for him. He grinned with elation. The City shone with promise.
Kriegorgrad
03-02-2005, 00:14
OOC: Very nice, especially considering that is your first post. Welcome to nationsates and enjoy your stay!

Oops, sorry, I noticed the "closed" part of the title, sorry for that! I'll delete this post if you want, just T/G me or tell me in OOC speak on here if you want it gone.
Jacksonesia
03-02-2005, 00:33
OOC: Very nice, especially considering that is your first post. Welcome to nationsates and enjoy your stay!

Oops, sorry, I noticed the "closed" part of the title, sorry for that! I'll delete this post if you want, just T/G me or tell me in OOC speak on here if you want it gone.

Don't worry about it - nice to have a warm greeting on to the forums. :)
I don't mind people saying welcome or offering a compliment, but if it could be kept to a minimum, I would appreciate it. :)

Next part coming tommorow.
Jacksonesia
04-02-2005, 19:27
Chapter Two

02 February 2005
1845 Hours

The Nottingham Albert Hall was locked down as tight as a drum. Ring fenced by metal wire, military soldiers and press reporters, the Jacksonesian Army was taking no chances that night.

A soldier in dress uniform with Lieutenant’s stripes paused as the Bentley pulled up in front of the hall. He opened the door to the rear of the vehicle and stepped back to allow the Chief of Staff to exit the vehicle. Cameras flashed and reporters yelled questions, almost drowned out by wailing police sirens and news helicopters that roared above.

Leaning to Donaldson’s ear, the Lieutenant still had to call loudly. “Lion is fifteen minutes away,” he informed the man, and Greg nodded before walking along the red carpet along the pavement to the door.

The thirty-year-old woman leaning in the doorway with a cigarette in her mouth grinned and dropped the cigarette off onto the road. Folding her arms, she looked down the road at her boss. “Greg, you’re looking great.”

Donaldson chuckled as the woman fell into step with him, stepping through into the Foyer. “Still trying to get a promotion by flattery, Lil?”

“A little.”

Donaldson glanced either side of the Foyer as he walked down the stairs. “Security is a little heavy,” he remarked. Two lines of soldiers sporting M16 rifles stood along either wall, staring across at their opposite number in an attentive stance.

Lil shrugged. “Well, this kind of thing is required,” she said matter-of-factly. “Don’t want a Coup when the government has only been in power two days.”

Donaldson nodded with a grin as they turned left and walked up the stairs towards the Great Hall. “No, that’s true.” He looked up as they pushed through the double doors.

(OOC: Only a quick addition tonight – got work to do.)