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Anyone want 2 roleplay?

Drake Verdon
01-01-2005, 17:51
Hey people ive got sum good ideas for roleplay. Here the start is...
Jack and Bob were going down the central river of (names) country. They had just recieved orders from there boss Jamie. They were too seek out an informant at the Hot Top Cafe. He had been boasting on message boards he had connections and explosives. When doing background checks for him nobody could find him. They were to locate him by his hat. He had said on Instant Messenger he would be wearing a blue hat with a star in the middle. The 2 agents continued down the river and came upon an enemy camp.
"What the ______?" Jack exclaimed
The radio buzzed in right then it was there boss. "Hey Jack and Bob u ther?"
"For now" Bob answered
"There's an enemy camp up ahead i want u to take them out."
"Oh god" Jack responded he could tell it was going to be one of those days.


Somebody else continue it. I made blanks so multiple people could do it. Also try to make it interesting
The Arcane Order
01-01-2005, 17:58
Just a few thoughts...

Firstly, avoid putting "2" instead of "to", and similar things (i.e. "u" instead of "you").

Secondly, run through your post with a spell-checker, it won't catch everything (my own posts are evidence enough for that), but it will help your posts look better.

Thirdly, posts entitles "Anyone want to roleplay?" and the like are normally OOC signup posts, so better to start off with a title that should get people interested.

Fourth, don't leave blanks. Make it in your own nation if you want.

Fifth, have a browse of the stickies - they help clarify a lot of things

Sixth, welcome to Nationstates.

~TAO
Drake Verdon
01-01-2005, 18:09
Thanks Arcane Order ive started a new and improved one thats called "Agents Bob and Jack (Open Roleplay)"