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The Bank Job (IC thread. The real deal)

Generic empire
03-09-2004, 00:43
Mr. Black sat at a table in the back of a seedy strip bar, which happened to belong to him The bar was crowded, therefore hazy, and the air was dark, so subsequently, Mr. Black's face was conveniently obscured. Before him stood a young man. The man wore dark sunglasses, which severely hampered his movement in the darkened club, but he was also too stubborn to remove them.

"We got five guys waitin’ to see you.”

“Yeah? Eddie and Frank with ‘em?”

“They got tagged doin’ somethin’ in Vermont. I think Eddie’s dead, and the boys in blue got our boy Frank.”

“Jesus. Vermont?”

“Yeah, boss. Some diamonds, or somethin’ else like that.”

“Yeesh. This better go better.”

“These are good guys we got. Should go pretty good.”

“Good things. They upstairs?”

“Yeah boss.”

“Good things. Oh, my wife’s birthday’s comin’ up. Go run out and get her somethin’ nice from that diamond wholesaler down in Long Beach.”

“Ah, boss. I hate Long Beach.”

“Yeah, me too, but get your ass out there and buy my wife somethin’ nice. I got business.”

Mr. Black got up, and walked towards the bar. He went through a small door behind the bar, and up a staircase. At the top was a large room, and a shaded glass window, showing the club below. There were five men sitting on various chairs and couches around the room. As Mr. Black stepped into the light, he was revealed to be a man of around fifty, with neatly combed graying hair, a mustache, and sporting a tuxedo. Mr. Black was always dressed for a funeral.

“Good evening, gentlemen. No need to waste time on details, ‘cause I’m sure Jimmy already told you what we’re doing here. I know all of you, but you all are perfect strangers. I aim to keep it that way. To keep things smooth, you all get aliases. You already know your own, but to clear things up for the rest, here they are.”

Mr. Black pointed to each criminal, speaking their alias as he did so.

“(Dregruk) Izzy, (Fight Club Global) Slash, (Borman Empire) Axl, (Doomingsland) Duff, and (Forum Feline) Steve. These are your names, gentlemen. Get used to them. Under no circumstances are you to reveal your real name to anyone else. It’s happened before, and the result is never good. People have rivalries, gentlemen. We try to keep those out of the picture here. It doesn’t matter what you have done in the past, who you worked for, who you killed. The only thing that matters is this job.

We’re going to hit a bank. A good friend of mine just made a large deposit in this bank, and I don’t want him to be able to get a chance to withdraw it. The sum is somewhere around twenty million dollars, all in neat little boxes. The security is moderate, but I’m sure that won’t be a problem for low down scoundrels such as you. Estimated response time once an alarm goes off is approximately four minutes. Our friend Chief Irwin doesn’t fuck around when it comes to robberies, so don’t let them trip that alarm. Those are the basics, genlemen. I leave planning the heist to our mutual friend Duff here. Axl works getaway, Izzy and Slash do crowd control. Steve breaks the safe. Let’s get to it. The withdrawal of the cash happens at noon tomorrow, so you don’t have forever. Oh, and act like fuckin’ professionals out there.”

With no further ado, Mr. Black turned and walked out of the room.
Generic empire
03-09-2004, 06:27
The moment he stepped out of the room, Mr. Black's cell phone began to go off in his pocket. He answered it, and after a brief, hushed conversation, turned back into the room.

"Alright gentlemen. Change of plans. You got one more to work with. Duff, just tell him where to go. Here's the number."

Mr. Black handed Duff a piece of paper with a phone number and the alias 'Sorum' scrawled across it.

"There's your boy. He's a crowd control specialist. Use him."
Roach-Busters
03-09-2004, 06:32
The phone rang.

He picked it up. "Hullo? Yeah, dis's Sorum. Uh-huh...uh-huh...yep...awright. I'll be there."

He hung up. That was just the call he was hoping for. Now, he could get back into action...
Dregruk
03-09-2004, 08:08
Izzy rubbed his face with a hand. Stubble again. He'd need to shave when he got home. Stubbly bank robbers didn't have the same amount of class as a clean shaven one.

"So, what's the plan? I assume this is as good a place as any to talk shop?" He asked in his usual, gruff tone.
Doomingsland
03-09-2004, 13:31
Duff sat at a table in the room, with a map of the bank stretched over it.

"Okay, boys, here's how we're gonna' do this. Me and Sorum go in from the front entrance, fully locked and loaded, and order everyone on the ground. We'll have Izzy and Slash already in there, and Sorum'll throw em' their weapons to assist in the crowd control. Steve pulls up in da' gettaway car, and cracks the safe. We grab as much cash as we possibly can, and get the hell out, I want Axl sitting in the parking lot the whole time, and pull up when I radio him. It should be a five minute job," he said, sitting straight up, "Questions? Comments?
Dregruk
03-09-2004, 17:15
"Just a few things," Began Izzy. The man had decades of experience behind his belt, and had seen jobs go haywire on more than one occasion. "What if the alarm is triggered? The cops'll be all over us like a rash. And surely it'll look suspicious if we hit a single account? Wouldn't there be something shifty about that that would lead it all back to us?"
Kyleralia
03-09-2004, 20:10
The Chief of Police Sat at his desk shuffling through the days work with a tired and fustrated look upon his face. He was an older man about 48 and had a trace of gray hair. He was very much over weight and stomach curled over his waste like he just ate a horse.

The phone Rang and the chief answered it careless.

Hello?

Hello Chief we have recieved confirmation from Mr.White that there is a bank robbery to go down soon.

Ah Good then we can get into action I'm going to need to meet him some how but i need to find that out for now. Tell Him to hold his horses. I'll get back to him as soon as I can.
Outer Heaven MK II
03-09-2004, 20:42
OOC: Can I join in with this GE?
Generic empire
03-09-2004, 20:44
OOC: Can I join in with this GE?

((OOC: Sure, TG me with who you want to be.))
imported_AmandaTheGreat
03-09-2004, 21:21
OOC: Very good read. May I join in with a character that wouldn't be expected in this or maybe she would, well, anyway, can I post soon?
Generic empire
03-09-2004, 21:22
OOC: Very good read. May I join in with a character that wouldn't be expected in this or maybe she would, well, anyway, can I post soon?

((OOC: TG me character info.

From now on, anyone who wants to join, TG me info first, so that we don't get too much OOC clutter, and to keep the others unexpecting.))
Roach-Busters
03-09-2004, 22:56
This is looking very nice.

bump
Forum Feline
03-09-2004, 23:45
"Look, as long as none of you guys scares some fucking teller into activating the alarm, then we're good. I've never set off an alarm in my whole career. Now, do we have any idea what model or make or any of that shit the goddamned safe is? Because the more I know about the safe, the less tools I've got to haul into there, the faster we can get out.

As for the single account, I've got no objections to taking the rest. But this is Black's job, and he decides."
Dregruk
04-09-2004, 10:11
"Okay. Those are the only questions I got for now. If the job's at noon, we don't got much time. I'd be much happier if we cased the joint a bit. Gives me an idea of where everyone'll be on the day."
imported_AmandaTheGreat
05-09-2004, 00:28
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"Excuse me, can you keep it down, I am concentration on some figures over here," came a rough voice a ways down the cubical from her.

A sweet soft voice called back, "I am sorry, it just helps me to remember what to do."

"Do it in your head."

A puzzled look came across Becca's face. Well, its the same thing, but one is using my voice and the other not. Becca looked down at her pile of envelopes, it was growing and she decided to start another pile. She was happy with the progress she made today. A hand placed on her shoulder made her jump a bit. She turned around and faced an older woman who appeared in her 50s. Becca smiled.

"Becca dear it is five. You may stop with the envelopes and go bake some cookies for tomorrow to give to the customers that come in. The directions are on the frig."

"Thanks, but I know."

"Just in case dear."

Becca stood up and put the envelopes in a box and handed to Miss Vera, who was the manager at the local bank Becca worked at. Miss Vera watched Becca disappear into the employee's kitchen and sighed. I worry about that child, so innocent, she is bound to get hurt someday. I vow to watch over her as she works here.

A younger snooty voice sounded from behind Miss Vera, "It is so nice of you Miss Vera to allow such a girl like her to work here."

"What do you mean girl like her?"

"You know, " mouthing the next word, slow.

"Yes, but she does do a lot for our organization."

A smirk, "Yeah, more money and something to look at, besides that she has nothing in her head."

"Charles, don't talk like that. Just because you are related to me does not mean that I cannot punish you for things you do."

Charles stormed off. Miss Vera to return to her job.

Meanwhile in the kitchen,

Okay, mix...mix....portion....okay. Twelve on a sheet, now I can put it in. She turned the dial and placed the sheet of cookies on the rack and closed the oven door. She smiled, another thing done. Now, to the dishes. She finished the dishes and went to the restroom to clean up. She looked up into the mirror.

Her pale creamy complexion was clear except for some smudges of flour on her face. She cleaned it off with a few splashes of cold water. She opened her forest green eyes and looked down at her clothes. Nothing to flashy. This was her favorite shirt. Orange, her favorite color. The sleeves were three quarter and it had a scoop neckline. The bottom hemline stopped at her hips. She was so proud of that shirt. She bought it at a thrift store for three dolars. She told all her friends. Well, her social worker, her landlord and her boss Miss Vera. She wore some black pleats and black comfy shoes. Okay, all clean. She ran her fingers through her shoulder-length maple hair. There. She walked out the door.

"Becca, are you done with all the cookies?"

"Yes, they are in the oven."

"Good. Now don't forget to be back here at 10 o'clock in the morning."

"I know, Miss Vera."

Out the door she left all the busy people to get their money. A smile crossed her face as the sun was still out. She walked to her apartment, ten blocks away. She stopped out infront at the only tree infront of the building. She looked up and saw a bird.

"Hello, Blue, you have a song for me today?"

The bird chirped a few notes and then flew into the sky.

She went inside and looked at her instructions for the remaider of the day that her and her social worker mapped out. When I get home from work...make supper, tonight was pasta and toast....do the dishes...watch the news...go to bed, don't forget to set the alarm...

Becca started with supper and then went through her instructions and off to bed.