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Sinking Ship (Open RP)

Larogera
30-08-2004, 20:36
"Get the captain! Get the captain!" George exclaimed.

A few people rushed towards the corridor and raced towards the captain's room. The girl! The girl!. He ran towards the assistant, Brian and told him.

"You have to get the girl. Bring her. We need to abandon in just a second...and we can't leave without her".

"The ship...sir...the ship...we must abandon now...", Brian stuttered.

"Why? Wha' da' ya' mean?" George asked, sweating.

"Well...all engines...all engines...all engines are out!" Brian shouted.

"Then we must....we must abandon ship!" George exclaimed.

Brian's hand shook so terribly as he clicked the red button. Suddenly, lights flickered. People rushed out of every room and started down the flight of steps.

"I will check every room. You get outta' here. Take only the most important belongings..." George said.

His words trailed off. The girl. She is most important. I must get her first. He ran towards the big room, and the girl was gone. She wasn't in her bathroom...wasn't in her closet...wasn't stuck anywhere.

George frantically checked every room and when nobody was in there, he went into the control room. Few people were left...shutting down the machines.

"Get out...all of you...I'll warn the navy", George commanded.

The men and women left the room. One took a pen and a book, another took a pocketwatch, and the other just left the room. George needed to gather his belongings. A walkie-talkie screamed at him...

"George, get your butt out here...I'm freezing, we're freezing...and we need you to grab coats...The ship is sinking, and you need to make it!" Brian shouted from outside on the boat.

"I need to send the message to the navy. Wait a sec'. If I'm not there in 10 minutes...send a message to the navy that the ship sunk, and that I was still there. It is better that you carry on, and me sink. Is the girl on the boat???" George asked.

But the walkie-talkie went blank. George took it, and clicked a button, shutting down the machines. He grabbed his coat...grabbed some clothes and blankets as well as some food from the cafeteria, and rushed down the stairs. By the time he opened the door, half of it was sinking, and Brian and the boat was gone.

"Oh...my...oh...my...oh..." he said.

The boat was sinking. George made his way to the top of it, and with his suitcase jumped in the water and floated away...floating with the current. He would take a nap...a long one...possibly his last.

20 years later.....

"A man was found...he was my friend...my dear friend...dead at the age of 46...he sacrificed his life for everyone on that ship!" Brian remembered.

The civil war was over. Everyone was back to normal. A new priminister was elected. Everything was well, but not quite. Scuba divers raced to the bottom of the Green Cove Bay trying to find George Torriello...or any clues of him anyway....one of the members on the L.A.R. Undercross, in which sank at approximately 2:45 a.m. on a chilly, snowing Saturday morning.

"I think we've found something. Order them to drop the anchor here!" one scuba diver said.

The ruins of Torriello in my hands...finally, I can find out all about this man, after studying for years.
Temme
30-08-2004, 23:54
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Larogera
31-08-2004, 02:10
OOC:Huh???
Temme
31-08-2004, 02:49
I was just letting you know that I'm reading this and will post when I have more info.
Larogera
31-08-2004, 17:48
(OOC: you can pick a character, I guess such as a scuba diver discovering stuff...just make it up...)

They dived down into the water looking at the ship. It looked horrible. It hit rock-bottom and was barely holding on to the bottom of the ship. They went into the ship and saw marvelous things.

"Look, everyone. I see patato chips", one laughed.

I'm hungry. I'd better eat these he thought. Jack was lousy, lazy, and very hungry. He was only doing this job because it was paying well. It put food on the table. It gave him a nice roof.

"That is not what we came here for", Patrick blabbed.

"Ooh...look at this. This is the control center", one shouted.

"Let us take a look, and see if it still works", Patrick said.

They arrived and looked all over for the switch until Patrick found it.

"Aah...ha...This must be it", Patrick said.

He turned on the switch and the computers didn't come up.

"Well of course it wouldn't come up, dumbheads! We are in water. It probably went out", Jack said.

They rushed into different rooms picking up mementos: old food, pieces of things, and even some strands and things left in the ship. When all of them came back up, they would do background searches, and all that garbage to find out what actually happened to the ship.

"I found a note sir. It might be important. It looks like it might've been written right before the ship sunk. Some of the ink was smudged", Patrick explained.

'Sir' was Captain James Broderick VI. He was a very strict, heavily disciplined guy. Probably been brainwashed by the military, Jack had thought when he first came here.

"Very nice Patrick. That is very nice. You need a promotion, I think. The rest of you need to work harder", Captain laughed.

I'll show you harder... Jack thought.