NationStates Jolt Archive


Brother mine (Story, not RP)

Sigma Octavus
14-07-2004, 06:05
Elli looked hard at her brother. How could he have done that. "Why? Why'd you kill dad?"
Erik grinned,"Well, Ellison, he was in my way. He was weak, unfit to lead our country." He looked thoughtfully at his hand, then clenched it into a fist."I ordered the SOLI to kill him, then covered it up. Just like with you." He drew a pistol and aimed it at her.
Elli screamed at him,"Fuking asshole! I'll kill you!" She ran at him and punched him in the face. He grabbed her by the wrist as she tried to hit him again. "Dear sister, you won't be killing anyone today." With that, he shot her. She fell to the ground clutching her shoulder.
Erik looked at the soldiers next to him. He motioned at her,"Deal with her." The soldiers moved forward, each reaching for one of her arms. They lifted her up roughly. She looked at one of them and looked back at the ground. Without warning, she reached for the pistol holstered around his waist. She pulled it out and shot him in the side under the armpit. He slumped over and she shot the other soldier in the side of the head. Finally, she aimed it at Erik, who was also pulling up his gun. Her's went off first, the bullet taking him in the gut.
More soldiers rushed into the room and opened fire with their rifles. She turned and ran, finding only a window to escape through. She dove through and flew across an alley way, she slammed into the wall of a building and fell three stories into a dumster. Luckily, the dumster was filled with paper scraps, and she was unharmed. She pulled herself out as soldier from above began to fire at her. She made her way slowly down the alley way to the road. She stumbled in front of a car, which slammed on it's brakes. She aimed her gun at the driver and forced him out of the car. She got in and drove.

Several hours later

She drove along at high speeds through the desert. She was getting groggy from the blood loss, even though she had wrapped her shoulder tightly in a shirt she found in the car. She looked in her mirror and saw a bright light. She vaguely heard the sounds of a helicopter. She knew she had to get out of the car. She slammed on the brakes and opened the car door. She was scrambling out when her world exploded.

Three days later

Elli jerked awake and sat up in the bed she was in. Looking around, she saw no one. She wondered where she was, but laid back down. She remembered the wound and felt for it. She found it had been cleaned and dressed. She looked around the room once again and saw a slip of paper on the cabinet next to her. She reached for it and picked it up.
Looking at the paper, she saw it was one of those slips that had some sayings from her father. She looked happily at it and remembered him. Then she remembered her brother. She was no longer happy.

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A man entered the room and she tried to get out of the bed, thinking she was in danger. The man, he looked to be around 80, told her to stay in bed. "Where.....am I?"
The old man recounted what had happened the last few days. He had found her in a river three days ago, and had pulled her out. She was currently at his home in the Sigmala desert. She had been sleeping since he brought her here.
She thought about it."You.....didn't tell anyone I was here, did you?" The old man replied that no, he had not. He also recounterd to her that he had seen a news article of a female assassin trying to kill Erik Chaknov and then escaping. She was reported to have been killed by a missile from a helicopter. "I assumed that it was you, and didn't tell anyone. I was a friend of your father, you see.Once he died, I worked for Erik. I found information that Erik had something to do with his death, but was exiled from Thresh when he found out I had been looking."
Elli thanked the man and got out of bed. He helped her to his kitchen where he made her soup. She ate and thanked him again. The old man looked at her. "You want to kill your brother, correct? You will need help if you want to do that. I know several people you could contact that could help you. I have already chartered a privately owned plane to take you to the first person on the list. You'll have to look for him to find him, but he'll be invaluable help." Elli knew who he was talking about. An old friend, who had been present for most of her childhood. "Dom?" The old man nodded,"Yes, Dominic would be willing to help. He left because he knew Erik was trouble."
Elli looked at the man."Why are you helping me? You could be killed." The old man nodded,"I always felt responsible for you father's death. I knew Erik had connections to the SOLI, but never said anything. Now here, take this list, and here's some money." Elli took the list the man produced as well as 30,000 Sigs for her trip. He took her to a private airport and led her to a plane. She thanked him yet again, and the plane left. She stared out the window at the sands below. "I'll be back Erik. You can be sure of it."

OOC: Wheee. New forums. Well, this is a little story I wrote up during the break. Part 1 at least. More will be coming. Oh, and if the emotions don't seem right, that's because I suck at emotion.

OOC2: Apparently Jolt is different with showing pictures. That has the [img] and everything....
Sigma Octavus
14-07-2004, 06:58
Input would be nice. Not forcing you too, but the sniper in the building across from your window is.

:sniper:
Sigma Octavus
15-07-2004, 05:35
.:bump:.
Sigma Octavus
15-07-2004, 23:37
.:bump:.

This will be updated with part 2 soon. Post what you think. I like to know what people think.

Later, there will be gunplay :mp5:
Sigma Octavus
23-07-2004, 22:28
Somewhere in Europe

Elli stepped out of the plane. Her shoulder still ached, but she pushed it out of her mind. She had to find Dom. But how? The SOMI had been after him for years, and there had been no sign of him. The old man must have had contact with him. Elli thought back to the time she had spent with him. She was 11 and he had taken her to......a night club. "That's it. Dom loved night clubs. Where would I find him around here?"

Elli didn't know the local language at all, but still tried to find any information on a nightclub. She picked up bits and pieces, a few address' here, some rumors there, and after a few days figured that she had enough information to find him. She waited until it turned dark before she moved out. The first club she went to was no good. Several guys tried hitting on her, but she declined. One guy got a swift kick in the crotch. The next one was a bad idea and the one after that was practically empty. She came to the last one she had the address of.

She looked up at the building. It was completely black, with a neon sign written in a foreign language attached to the front. She walked towards the building, but stopped when a man shattered through a window near the front door. She looked through the hole and saw a figure standing in the middle of a large crowd, loud techno blaring everywhere. Someone went for the figure with a knife, but wound up with the blade in his neck. Elli stepped through the broken window, careful of the sharp edges. Three more men rushed the figure. One man's head connected with the ceiling while the other two were thrown into the crowd. Elli got a quick glimpse of the man in the middle. Eye length black hair on the left side of his head, shoulder length on the right.
Elli called out over the music, confident that if it was him, he would hear her,"Dommy?!" The figure stood up straight and looked at her for a second before a fist from the right got him in the ribs. Dom kicked the man in the face and sent him into a wall. Dom flipped over the crowd and grabbed Elli, then they ran out of there.

After turning into an empty alleyway, Dom looked at Elli. "El, what are you doing here?" Elli looked up at him, tears in her eyes,"Erik.....he killed my dad." Dom nodded,"Yeah, I had sorta figured that a while ago. But what are you doing here?" She sniffed,"He tried to kill me too when I found out. I got away, and this old man helped me and told me to find you." Dom grinned,"Proter? Old geezer's still alive, eh?" Dom kneeled down next to her,"Hey El, it's gonna be okay. You want revenge right?" El wiped her eyes,"Yeah....." Dom nodded,"Well, I can help."

El remembered the list and pulled it out, showing it to Dom. Dom scanned it over. "Okay......most of these people are dead. The only ones alive are.....Drake Hunt and Kara Otara. Once we find them, we can help you. We all have scores to settle with Erik anyways." Elli nodded, thanking him.

1 year later
Erik lounged in his office. His father used to work here, and died in this room. Erik never thought anything about it, only fools are superstitious. He had slowly been working through the list of his half-siblings, killing off each and every one. He would create a dynasty that would last thousands of years. He smiled and kicked his feet up on his desk. There came a knock at his door. "Yes, who is it." A lietenant of the black sun walked in. He walked to the desk and snapped a salute. Erik saluted back, tired of formalities. "Sir, we have some disturbing news. At least three people on the most wanted list have begun working together. Also.....we found your sister." Erik jumped up and grabbed the file the lieutenant was carrying. He opened it and looked at the documents and pictures. "That bitch. How did she live? Leave me!" The lieutenant turned and left.

Erik read carefully through everything. Ellison had managed to make quite a deadly group. The vampire, a former SOET and a well known assassin. They would come after him, he knew it. He hit the intercom to the front office. "Lieutenant Strykes. Get General Dour down here immediately." "Yes sir." Erik leaned back in his chair. This was a problem....a huge problem.

Europe
Kara lay on the roof next to Elli. "Okay El, this is your final test. You know the target, where it's gonna be, and what the opposition is." El nodded and placed the rifle before her. There it was, the target. Kara set up a rifle with a scope next to her, in case El missed. Elli's rifle had no scope. She was to make a killing shot from 300 meters. The target cruised down the street. A limousine with a full cadre of escorts. El found that the skylight was open. She took aim. Breathing steadily, she lay her finger on the trigger. She began a long exhalation and fired. Kara watched through the scope as blood flew out of the skylight. El had hit the target square in the forehead.

Kara and El stood up. Kara smiled,"You passed on marksmanship. Come, I have something to show you." Kara and El went to the stairs down from the roof and entered the building. They came to the apartment that the two were using. Dom and Drake were out making arrangements for weapons and transportation. Kara unlocked the door and led the way. This place had once been a factory of some kind, but was dirt cheap. And inconspicuous. Once inside Kara pulled a box from under her bed. She handed the box to El who opened it. Kara gave a little explanation."I made a few modifications to my standard assassin outfit because you are a little larger in the breast area than I. A gift to help." El held up the black outfit. Kara motioned to the bathroom,"Well, get changed." Elli went into the room and shut the door. Several minutes later, she came out. She stood in front of a mirror and looked at herself. Then she turned to Kara. "Thanks....I like it even if.....it is a little revealing." Kara smiled,"No problem at all."
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The sound of the door being unlocked came and Drake and Dom walked in. Drake was the first to sight El, and being only two years older than her, whistled."Hey, El. Lookin' hot." Dom nudged him,"Come on man, she's like my sister." Drake smiled sheepishly.

Kara, feeling she was being ignored, spoke up."So, you made all the arrangements?" Drake gave a quick thumbs up."We got everything and thensome. We can get back to SO in two weeks under false names. Weapons are all done, they'll be at a set location in the desert when we get back home."

El sighed. Home. Revenge. Her life. She wanted all those things so badly. Drake smiled."El, you looking forward to the big homecoming?" El laughed,"Yeah. It will be a blast."

(OOC: And there is part 2. Even though no one has posted what they think, this is still important to my country. It's my change of leadership story.)