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Compolis

27-04-2004, 13:13
OOC: Just going to provide information on my country so in future none can say I made it up just then to get out of something etc, you get the picture

In the Begining . . .
In the Begining Compolis was a barren land inhabited by small "clans" of those who could not afford land in another nation or where exiled from their lands. The Empire has no original race but it is a mix of race's the only link was that the people had no where else to live. After a while of the clans living in their smalls shacks and shanties a few people from certain clans united together with plans to build a city after a few years of working a small town had been errected this attracted most of the clans people who moved to the town. As time progressed the population grew and so did the town eventualy evolving into a sprawling City. Certain parts of the city where controlled by those original clans, People fought and died for there clan. After a while the decendants of those who first planned the city elected one man to run there nation his name, Ralph Jason's the new Emperor had a dream to see the city under one control without the constant warrings of the clans

The Power Struggles
Compolis had no need for a Millitary but it did have a need for a police force the Emperor saw his weakness of attack but also knew that he needed to protect the city from its self and thus he join the Police and Millitary into one service the INDF (International & National Defence Force) the streets where patrolled and the justice was swift and harsh. Crime was down and the people where happy. After much time of the clans being "peaceful" there was a meeting held by the respective leader of each clan the topic was an all out attack against the goverment to restore the city back to there control most of the clans merged together to create the Rebels. After attacks on INDF barracks and a long growing power battle occured the Rebels pretty much controlling the south side of the city and nothing could be done about it the city was to narrow to even think of using tanks and any INDF officers got shot to peices just going near the south. The use of Dune Buggies eqqupied with machine guns provided the fast movment and the ability to travel practicly anywhere in the city whilst the city warred with its self the Rebels managed to get there own vechiles and thus the Emperors advantage was gone instead know the Rebels where able to kill more Officers than before the battle still rages on its end is uncertain.

About Compolis
Compolis is an Inland City the entire land is one giant city there is nothing else except the barren wasteland that is left. With the growth and the slow devolpment of new land for the city Apartment buildings got bigger and bigger and continue to

Millitary Information
INDF
INDF Officers are issued with an Urban Coloured Camo Gear and there weapon is an AUG Steyr an INDF Officer is in training for Five years before being sent out to the streets and the heirachy is very simple

Colonel(Sp?) *****
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Chief Commander ****
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Commander **___ INDF Special Unit ***
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______Officer*

Rebels
The Rebels have no set items they mainly use what ever they can get there hands on and they have been known to wear bandanas or masks to hide there indentity

OCC: I will update this every know and then
28-04-2004, 05:03
Bump, any feedback?
Dread Lady Nathicana
28-04-2004, 06:05
ooc: Looks like you've got yourself a good start there. It's enjoyable seeing folks put some time and thought into a lil background and history, getting a feel for their nation and all. Best of luck with it.

One thing I'd recommend is checking your spelling a bit more closely - yes, I know it's a nitpicky thing, but it's a shame to work hard on something then have those lil details kind of nag like that - happens to me all the time, I know. *grins* Don't always depend on a word processor or what not - there and their are both correct, but the context you use them in, for example, may not be what you wanted.

At any rate - welcome aboard (or back, or hullo again if this is an alternate nation for someone already familiar), hope you enjoy, and hey - don't get discouraged if you don't have folks flocking to your threads right off the bat. I've seen even well-established players have threads get little to no attention. Don't let that stop you.

--Nathi's Player
The Holy Saints
28-04-2004, 06:21
good start. pretty good job... i should get around to this one day... prolly in the summer, since right now school has caught me by surprise(think of a little bird and a cinder block falling on it.)

edit: like lady nathicana said; work on your grammar... its a bit off, making it hard to understand/read.
Moozimoo
28-04-2004, 07:08
good to see not all newbies are n00bs.