NationStates Jolt Archive


Memoires of a fallen hero (story RP)

Trixia
16-04-2004, 23:18
Bullets surrounded Commander Winters as he ran to the next foxhole, the attacks were gettin more and more fierce now, they couldn't hold out much longer against the rebel upstarts. He got to the foxhole and found Privater Gould leaning over the side.

"Gould? Gould!"

Upon turnung him over, Gould was dead, shot in the face.

Dammit! The goddamn war! It killing us all! Why did i even sign up for this!?"

*Flash Back to Basic Training*

"SHUT UP YOU RETARDS!!"

The recruits promtly, shut up.

"RIGHT, YOU WILL ALL RUN ROUND THIS CAMP UNTIL I SAY STOP, DO YOU UNDERSTAND???"

"Yessir!"

"I CAN'T HEAR YOU!"

"YESSIR!!"

"RIGHT. GO!"

The recruits began to run round the yard, Private Winters was in the middle.

"Private Winters, why does Major Higgins hate us?"

"Major Higgins doesn't hate us Hughes, he just hates you"

*Laugher*

"Oh, thanks Winters"

*Flash back to now*

Commander Winters laughed "Those were the days! Everything was so simple then, the only bad thing was Major Higgins!"

*A shell hits just outside the foxhole*

Time to go...

Commander Winters begins to run again to another foxhole, dodging bullets as he does...
Largent
16-04-2004, 23:33
A few questions:
1) is this an open RP?
2)What tech is it?
3)If it is open and I may join can I play any character I wish?
Trixia
16-04-2004, 23:55
double post
Trixia
16-04-2004, 23:55
A few answers:
1) Hmm...... not really, but hey, go for it!
2) Don't really know...
3) Yeah sure, it'll give it some life :D
Largent
17-04-2004, 00:37
OOC: Well, until a tech level is chosen I'll just be very vague:

IC: Commander Machonicie Stood in the middle of the battle feild when news spread of the fallen comrad. He gathered the mn around him and thy dicided to recover the mans body so that he may be properly put to rest.

We'll give you cover with some heavy fire. Watch out for craters!

Those were the Major's parting words as incoming shells began pounding pockets of troops, victory was probably not likely.

Cammander GET DOWN! One man yelled as they group of five dove into a samll crater bearly missing machine gun fire. Over their heads flew rockets and high explosives. The firing ceased. The 5 made a mad dash across the battlefeild. Finally the found themselves at the foxhole.

I see the body Commander!

Get it out of there!

Again fire rained down from atop a hill ad again cover fire was supplied. Cammander Machonicie bacame suspicious as he had the others evacuate the body. He raised his guna nd scaled the hill. Over the top he saw a chilling site, massive artillery positions were being taken. He radioed back to the main force of fighting:

Tell the men to get into the trenches. The enemy is closing. He paused as he saw something even worse. AND GET THE AA GUNS! WE GOT BOMBERS ON OUR HANDS!