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The Xan war (Open RP!!! Future Tech)

Techon
16-03-2004, 03:35
[OOC: Here is a sketch on what will happen. This RP is based in a star wars galxy thing. The Xan are from another galaxy blah blah blah, I will tell you more about them later. Anyways the beginning is a space battle over the Earth skies. Xan against me, CW and Noir if they joins, and the poeple who join as well. Then after that the setting will take place in the Jedi academy. Where some students are (CoreWorlds if you bring John into this, make sure he starts at the academy, not the space battle) Padawans, students, Jedi, and Jedi Knights are assigned to different planets for different missions against the Xan. Meanwhile an infiltration team is sent to a Xan military base to get info on them. It will then round up in other Jedi missions, then a final conclusion of a giant space battle, and a Jedi duel...]

The flashes were bright, the ships were visible. Death, destruction, this is what comes out of war. Earth was caught up in one, the Xan war. Over Earth the battle took place. A Xan fleet against a Techon fleet. Ships rushed against each other, frigates provided supports, Xan mombers made runs against the bugger ships. Destroyer, and Defender class ships (Both resemble Star Destroyers) shot at enemy motherships, or sent out fighters.
Twenty Motherships, no World Ships luckily. The Motherships were all red, and shaped like a star, with five points. Hangars were dotted here and there between the arms. The ships from point to point were about 2 km. and about 1/2 km from top to bottom.
Deathbringers were the basic one man ship, Shaped like an arch, witht he cockpit on top, and three medium cannons going down each side of the two wings.
Bombers were shaped like eggs, with a bridge about halfway up, and a crew of about twenty.
Frigates were shaped like cylindars, black cylindars.
The battle needed aid, so a Destroyer Class ship, the Chessboard sent out a distress signal.

"Calling any ally fleet of Techon, we require your aid at the Sol system, we are in a battle with the Xan and are the losing side. We request aid over."

[OOC: Join in!!!]
-Noir-
16-03-2004, 03:41
::Tag::

im in!!! i got some things i want to try out
-Noir-
16-03-2004, 03:45
::Tag::

im in!!! i got some things i want to try out some of my space vessels
Hattia
16-03-2004, 04:42
(A good chance to try out my new Revolution class ship.)

HNSC Hammer of the Proletariat

"Admiral, we've picked up a distress signal, from a Techon military ship." The Admiral gazed at his map, "Order up the fleet, we depart in 10 minutes."

10 minutes later

"Preparation's complete, activating fleet comm channels."

"Red Sickle, ready!" (Retribution class Destroyer)
"Karl Marx, ready!" (Nemesis class Battleship)
"Haton, ready!" (Proletariat class Assault Frigate)
"Lancer, ready!" (Alexandrov class Missile Frigate)
"Leningrad, ready!" (Brusilov class Crusier)
"Frederick Engels, ready!" (Revolution class Battlecruiser)
"Severnaya, ready!" (Galaxy class Carrier)

"All ships reporting in, ready to go." Admiral Zaitsev stood up, "Initiate lightspeed engines, now."

The ships appeared to stretch out and then dissapeared.

3 hours later

"Coming out of lightspeed in the Sol system Admiral. All ships reporting no damage." The Admiral nodded, "Ready the fighters and charge the ion cannons." The man peered at his console and pressed a few buttons, "Done, we are exiting hyperspace... All ships reporting, enemy contacts spotted." The Admiral grimaced, "Move in and engage! Give them everything we have."
CoreWorlds
16-03-2004, 05:20
OOC: Hmm. I suspect this is long after the battle that took place over my nation in the other thread. Anyway, *tag*, for now, since I'm pretty tired.
Techon
16-03-2004, 15:37
OOC: Hmm. I suspect this is long after the battle that took place over my nation in the other thread. Anyway, *tag*, for now, since I'm pretty tired.

Yes you are correct, I was thinking about making the beggining battle a mop up of the leftover Xan, but I decided to make it a few years after that battle.
Oh yah CW, when you join, Tenchi, if you bring him into this, will be the jedi who fights in the jedi duel at the end.
CoreWorlds
16-03-2004, 19:38
A few years into the future, in a galaxy not so far away...

Music plays. (http://www.soundamerica.com/sounds/themes/Movies/starwars.wav)

It was a time of peace, after the Demon War. The President of Coreworlds now has a young and growing family, strong in the Force. Someday, the sons and daughters of John Tenchi Masaki would become powerful Jedi Knights, but for now, they are children.

Shattering this time of peace was the Xan Empire, who fought and lost a battle over the nation years ago. Still vengeful, they continue to fight the Techon forces, and their allies. Soon, even CoreWorlds will not be able to stay out of the war for long...

Camera pans down to show a space battle taking place over Earth. Techon and Xan forces fought to the death as powerful weaponry tore at each other's hulls and fighters fought in a massive dogfight.
The Chessboard sent out a distress signal, which was recieved by the fleet of the ISDII Fireball, who was the first to reach the beleagered forces.

Initial forces:
3 Star Destroyers
2 Victories
5 Frigates (one medical)
5 gunships
4 corvettes
Techon
16-03-2004, 22:48
[OOC: I will do this battle faced pace. So don't be offended by me taking over your ships during the post. I just drew a picture of my Jedi and his lightdaber, and I can't wait to use him! And for those of you who are testing new ships out, don't worry there will be plenty, and I mean plenty of space battle for you to use them.]

The organized fleets came in. The all pulled up towards Techon's fleet. The Xan were in trouble now they had to fight Techon, -Noir-, Hattia, and CoreWorlds. They didn't nearly have enough firepower. The front lines were easily dimiished.
"Retreat! Retreat!" A commander said.
The Motherships still remaining (13) started to turn around and headed in the opposite direction, fighters went back into their bays. The allied forces quickly chased them, and brought down five more before the Xan retreated.

Yavin 4
The Jedi temple, peaceful, quiet.
In one of the many courtyards Jedi padwans, and students walked around, talking to each other.
Sitting down was a group of Jedi. About twenty total. All ranging from 16-27 years old. They were listening to a master who was talking about Yoda, and Master Windu, Obi-Wan Kenobi, and all the great jedi of old.
Luke Skywalker was standing in his office, watching it all. He had known two of the three, and wished he knew the third as well.
He wasn't the young farmer boy he used to be. Now he was 38, and he had the marks of aging. He wore a black leather suit. With black gloves, his brown hair still the same style it always was.
He was married, with Mara Jade. A former "aprentice" of the Emperor. His sister Leia Organa Solo was married to good old Han Solo, aned they had three kids; Jaina, Jacen, and Anakin Solo. Anakin, the same name as his fathers, untill he became Lord Vader.
He had no kids of his own, and he and his wife had been pondering if they should or not for years.

In the courtyard, in the group sat Vinn Tessar. He was twenty five years old. He had thick black/brown hair, that was jelled to be a little spiky. He was wearing baggy khaki shorts, and a tan t-shirt. Over the t-shirt was a black vest, that looked almost like kelvar. The vest went over his shoulders, but there were big gaps running down the sides. Through the gaps you could see his t-shirt. On his belt, clipped on was his lightsaber. A jedi's dearest weapon, a jedi's only weapon.
He made his by himself, like all jedi do. His was a shiny silver cylindral tube. Over part of it was a white ivory like piece, it went around the entire top of the hilt, and gradually decreased as it went down, so at the very bottom it was just a littlw point on one side. On it were the buttons the on button, the length switch, and the power button. If he pressed the one button, it would turn on, if he pressed it again, it went off. If he pressed the length switch, it would double in size, as well as change to a different color. If he pressed the power button, it would increase, or decrease in power, making it stronger, for heavier attacks, or lighter, for more graceful attacks.
His blade is silver, and when it is double length, it is orange.
He sat in the grass listening about the jedi who have passed on before him. How they to had vowed the Jedi code, and followed it to death.

[OOC: Alright, now if you want you can create a jedi of your own. -Noir- if you want you can use Keji, but he will have a lightsaber instead of a Katana! CW I suggest you use Tenchi.]
CoreWorlds
17-03-2004, 05:32
OOC: It's fine. just lemme know when you do. TG me for a MSN or AIM sn and we'll talk more.

IC:
Meanwhile, I was getting ready to head to the Yavin system with my sons. Bryan Sandler will run the country while I'm gone, so no problem there.

"Ready guys?" I asked Alex and Tenchi Jr, 7 and 5.
"Yeah!" This was their first trip to the Republic section of the Galaxy, though not their first into space. We were taking the Presidental space yacht. Armed with quad lasers and powerful deflector shields, it'll be hard for pirates to attack, especially considering the fact that I have an X-wing stowed in the cargo bay and a couple escorts joining.

My daughter Marlene (3) and wife Toni will stay home to tend to domestic affairs, so it's just me and the boys.
We headed to the yacht and boarded it.
"All ready, sir?"
"Yes. We're ready to go."
"All right. Strap in!"
I strapped the kids in, and then signaled the pilot to take off.
The repulserlifts ignited with a roar, and then the ship rose into the air. once out of sight of the ground, the sublights kicked in, propelling the spacecraft past the gravity well of Earth.
"Here we go, kids!" I said, as the familiar hum of the hyperspace engines signaled the jump has begun. It will take about 10 hours to arrive at Yavin.

http://ourworld.cs.com/OhMyBelldandy009/Inuyasha+Caps/Scared+Sota.jpg
Alex

http://daisuki.piranho.de/ChibiSektion/GundamWing/chibi-gw11.jpg
Tenchi Jr.
-Noir-
17-03-2004, 06:36
hmmm...not ready yet...too much hw...

if you want a hint to what space tech i have check out the Xenosaga series, and a little bit of Zone Of the Enders

in the Xeneosaga series, one extra hint: Durandal

in ZOE: Jehuty
Khrrck
17-03-2004, 07:21
Techon, if you're going to RP Star Wars stuff, or indeed anything, do it PROPERLY. That means:

Spell things correctly. "Dimiished"? "Lightdaber"? "Cylindars"? Good grief.

Be realistic. You can't launch a X-Wing from a space yacht's cargo bay. X-Wings require special docking, rearming, and fuelling equipment that can only be provided by a carrier bay.

Be polite. Don't hijack people's characters/ships.

Be authentic. Don't use cartoony anime images for pictures of your characters.

George Lucas would have nightmares if he saw the drivel you're spouting.
CoreWorlds
17-03-2004, 16:47
OOC:
1. I have to tell you that you're wrong on the X-wing. They can be fit into most cargo bays, not just carrier bays. Granted, I agree with you on the arming and fueling, but you don't put a starfighter into a cargo bay without checking that it's fully armed and fueled.
2. I'm allowing for Techon's quirks in this thread. He will merely have to offer a quick explanation of what's he doing to my ships and things will be fine. If they're attacked, I post losses.
3. What's wrong with anime? If it annoys you, then I'm not sorry.
4. George Lucas likely won't care, even though it is his story.
CoreWorlds
17-03-2004, 21:06
10 hours later, the Masaki family yacht arrived in the Yavin system, and two hours later, we're at the fourth moon of the gas giant. Yavin is known for the attack on the Death Star 20 years ago, which the now Master Skywalker participated in.

I contacted the fourth moon of Yavin, where the New Republic Jedi Academy resides.

"Jedi Academy, this is John Tenchi Masaki ready to land. Please respond."
Khrrck
17-03-2004, 23:47
OOC:
1. I have to tell you that you're wrong on the X-wing. They can be fit into most cargo bays, not just carrier bays. Granted, I agree with you on the arming and fueling, but you don't put a starfighter into a cargo bay without checking that it's fully armed and fueled.

OK. I apologize.

2. I'm allowing for Techon's quirks in this thread. He will merely have to offer a quick explanation of what's he doing to my ships and things will be fine. If they're attacked, I post losses.

OK, but it's still usually "not done". Most people aren't so forgiving.

3. What's wrong with anime? If it annoys you, then I'm not sorry.

Anime = OK, if you happen to like it.
Anime + Star Wars = No.

4. George Lucas likely won't care, even though it is his story.

Well, yeah, but it was such a good departing phrase. :P

As for the spelling; Techon, most of the spelling mistakes I can see are typing mistakes; hitting a "d" instead of a "s" and such. This isn't IRC*, you have time to check your posts for this sort of thing, and fix it.

Just take a few minutes to look over your posts and fix mistakes, and you'll be much more readable**.

*Although it can be quite fast, it's not that fast.

**And I will be much happier.
Arenumberg
17-03-2004, 23:49
OOC: lol, you have to be as fast as possible with the forums in their current state
CoreWorlds
18-03-2004, 00:29
OOC: Fine, fine, but I'm still not changing the pics. Don't care if you call me a "stupid bastard who loves anime too much". I'm still not changing anything.
-Noir-
18-03-2004, 00:34
hey whats wrong with anime!?!?
18-03-2004, 03:13
OOC:

I shall join in with the new Flagship of the Colonial Space Fleet, the Colonial Forces Space Fortress Behemoth, three miles in length but no transforming capabilities.

Images:

http://www.artemisgames.com/robotech/images/macross_tandb.jpg
Bottom(Above), Top(Below)
http://www.artemisgames.com/robotech/images/macross_side.jpg
Rear-Side View

This is the ship we so long worked on and mentioned to be fair, so stats have not been created yet, but the obvious weapons are the "arm" shoulders with two Hyper-Rail Guns each, meaning it has two shoulders with two Hyper-Rail Guns each, equalling four.

Specs come later.

I join if accepted.
Techon
18-03-2004, 03:33
[OOC:Welcome aboard Nodea, I believe Luke Skywalker stores his X-Wing in his wifes ship, which probably isn't much bigger than CW's yacht. I am not the biggest fan, but I like anime. I also think that it would go fine with Star wars, in fact anime goes fine with everything.]

"Greetings master Tenchi, welcome, you are permitted to land."
18-03-2004, 03:40
OOC:

Thanks.

IC:

The bridge was dark, almost impossible to see if not for the nearby star emitting light into the bridge. Silent Running was an effective, if not quiet mode for the CFSF Behemoth. Only the low hum of instruments and quiet noises of computations by panels, consoles, and computers, if not the occasional typing sounds, were the only sounds clearly heard.

Suddenly, silence on the bridge was broke.

"Behemoth detects many ships, none imcoming, but all in one area."

"Identification?"

"'Unspecified, databanks do not have these types of ships."

"Keep an eye on it, and the rest."

"Yes sir, High General."

Silence again consumed the darkened bridge.
CoreWorlds
18-03-2004, 04:17
OOC: How old are the Solo kids at this time?
Techon
18-03-2004, 04:30
Jacen/Jaina=10
Anakin=9
CoreWorlds
18-03-2004, 05:02
OOC: They'll make good friends with Alex and TJ.

IC:
The yacht descended into the atmosphere and landed on the large pad. The kids and I disembarked, and we were met with...
Arenumberg
19-03-2004, 00:03
OOC:displaying intention to be involved, heh, techon get on msn or something and add me
Techon
19-03-2004, 22:42
[OOC: I will soon enough Arnemburg, it usually takes me a little while to get around to something.]
[P.S. I have been trying to post this post for the past two days, two days ago I almost finished typing it when I had to leave for the hgihschool regional basketball tounrament. Then yesterday I was typing it when my dad kicked me off.]

Vinn strode along the circle, and across from his was Cener Barith (Senner Bear-ith) they looked in each others eyes, not daring to take them off. Vinn blinked normally though, it was a beginners mistake to keep their eyes open in a duel, it would cause their vision to get blurry.
Cener brought his lightsaber up, it was green. Vinn did the same with his own Silver one.
All around the ring was the other students. They were practicing a duel, unfortunately, there were no longer any practice sabers, so they had to use the real ones, and rely on the force to block attacks.
Cener charged. He swung at Vinn's legs, who parried with his, the sabers clashed and made a hiss while smoke rose, and sparks flew.
They brought the sabers back up, clashing once again between their faces.
They swung again, meeting at Vinn's right. Cener sumersaulted backwards, and VInn did a backflip. He landed and they looked at each others, then they charged again.

As the shuttle landed Luke Skywalker, Jacen, Jaina, and Anakin Solo stood in the docking bay. When the shuttle opened, and the two boys and their father walked out Skywalker greeted them.
"Hello Master (Is he a master?) Tenchi Masaki. It is good to see you again, as well as your children, I am Master Luke Skywalker, and I welcome you to the jedi academy."
CoreWorlds
19-03-2004, 23:34
(No, a Knight. His father Nathan is the Master.)

"Thank you, Master Skywalker." I bowed. "Here is my oldest, Alex, and my second, TJ. I'm sure that they will be good friends with your niece and nephews."
Techon
19-03-2004, 23:54
"I am sure of that to Jedi Knight Tenchi," Master Skywalker. "Let me introduce them to you two. This is Jaina," He said motioning his hand for Jaina to step forward. "Her twin brother Jacen," Again he motioned. "And their younger brother Anakin," he didn't need to motion, because Anakin already strolled up.
Master Skywalker continued. "Should we show them the temple?"

Vinn blocked once again, this was getting tiring. He jumped int he air, and landed behind Cener, and swung. Cener parried it behind his back.
Cener turned around, and looked Vinn in the eyes, then swung again.
CoreWorlds
20-03-2004, 00:53
"Of course, Master. Lead the way."

"Hey, Jacen." Alex said. "What do you like to do?"
Techon
20-03-2004, 01:13
"Hello Alex," Jacen said. "I guess I like to explore aroun the temple."

Luke Skywalker took the lead as they walked along one of the temple corridors.
They came out into the courtyard, and there was a circle of students, in the middle was Vinn's, and Cener's duel.
"As you see our number of students have rised," Skywalker said,

Vinn spun his lightsaber around the blade of Cener's, he caught it back in his hand, and swung down. Cener parried it aside, and swung at stomach hieght.
Vinn knocked it aside and thrusted forward, but Cener jumped out of the way.
Lunatic Retard Robots
20-03-2004, 01:28
The 1st Battlefleet, under the direction of Admiral Ix, picks up the Techon fleet's message. On their way to claim Quaoar, they pass are easily within range of the message.

At the head of the massive formation of ships, with no purpose except to cruise around, is the LRRSV Andrei Sakharov, a massive Michael Strogoff class battlecarrier. The other ships in the group hover around it.

"Eh, there's this message. From Techon, it appears."
"What does it say?"
"Come help us out, pretty much."
"Well, while Dozle is taking a nap, I think we can pop over to have a look."
"They're over Sol."
"Ok. All ships, prepare for hyperspace to Sol."

From LRR earth, a squadron of Spruce Head class gunships takes off for space......
Techon
20-03-2004, 01:34
[OOC: Just to let you know LRR, the first battle is over. But more will take place.]
Lunatic Retard Robots
20-03-2004, 01:50
[OOC: Just to let you know LRR, the first battle is over. But more will take place.]

Oh. Ok. In that case, they go back to claiming Quaoar.

Meanwhile.....

In the Yavin system, an old Abraham Lincoln class battlecruiser turned freighter coasts toward Yavin. Unbeknownst to everyone else, it is actually a freighter/surveillance ship. It has been sent by the government to help Techon out.

"Yavin <insert number here> approach control, this is the LRRMSV Slowhand requesting information on your spaceport facilities, over."
Techon
20-03-2004, 02:16
"Greeting Slowhand this is the Jedi Academy, we have a dock for small frieghters open, you ave permission to land there."
CoreWorlds
20-03-2004, 02:54
"Hello Alex," Jacen said. "I guess I like to explore aroun the temple."

Luke Skywalker took the lead as they walked along one of the temple corridors.
They came out into the courtyard, and there was a circle of students, in the middle was Vinn's, and Cener's duel.
"As you see our number of students have rised," Skywalker said,

Vinn spun his lightsaber around the blade of Cener's, he caught it back in his hand, and swung down. Cener parried it aside, and swung at stomach hieght.
Vinn knocked it aside and thrusted forward, but Cener jumped out of the way.

OOC: Jacen's good with animals and likes to catch and raise them. Jaina and Anakin are good with machines, Anakin more so than Jaina, who's preference is computers.

IC:
"Really? What do you do around here?" Alex asked, while T.J looked for somewhere good to play.

"Yes, I notice there's more students than I thought." I said to Luke. "We only have about...200 or so."
Lunatic Retard Robots
20-03-2004, 04:00
"Greeting Slowhand this is the Jedi Academy, we have a dock for small frieghters open, you ave permission to land there."

"Thanks. Uhhh.... we aren't exactly a small freighter. We're actually a converted battlecruiser. We'll send a corvette down. Requesting orbital pattern, over."

The freighter's captain and a group of crewmembers enter one of the ship's corvettes. It motors out of the docking bay, and heads towards the planet's surface.

"This is C-24385792S, requesting landing clearance, over."
Techon
20-03-2004, 04:41
[OOC: Sorry, the only major thing about Jacen that I know that he is observsive, and takes in all around him. I know more about Jaina and Anakin Jaina is a good pilot (She joined Rouge Squadron) and Anakin is very good with droids, and computers, and mechanics. Just like the first Anakin! Also that Anakin is a decent pilot.]

"Go ahead," Came the reply.

"Well," Jacen said as he looked around and smiled. "There are a wide vareity of birds, and small mamals."
"Puh," Anakin bursted out. "He just looks at them and smiles, nothing to good."
Jaina just watched her two brothers argue, not daring to get into the fight as well.

Vinn charged, his saber at head hieght, and pointing forward, Cener blocked it aside.
It was easily seen that they were both tired, they had been doing this for an hour aready.
"Alright," The master said. "I think that is enough for today."
Cener and Vinn bowed to each other, and then the students all went off in their own directions.
"Padawan Tassar," Skywalker called out.
"Yes master Skywalker?" Vinn asked.
"I would like you to meet Jedi Knight Tenchi," Skywalker said. "Tenchi, this is Padawan Vinn Tassar."
Lunatic Retard Robots
20-03-2004, 05:09
"Roger that. Landing on the first free pad we see."

The corvette enters the atmosphere of Yavin. The majestic architecture of the Jedi temple comes into view, and the corvette heads toward it. Soon, finer details like the landing pad come into view, and the corvette touches down.
CoreWorlds
20-03-2004, 05:14
Alex and T.J. just laughed. T.J. is like Jacen, curious about the natural world, while Alex creams everyone he meets on video games. He might have a major challenge from Anakin, though.

"I'm pleased to meet you, Vinn." I said. "I see you are well-trained."

OOC:
How old is he again?
-Noir-
20-03-2004, 08:34
-Noir-
20-03-2004, 08:36
{The Imperial -Noir- galactic star-ship, the Durandal, enters the star system}

http://www.gpara.com/special/soft/xenosaga/img7/deurandaru01.jpg

OOC: that little blue spec on the right of the Durandal is the Elsa...this ship is equivalent to a light cruiser

http://www.gpara.com/special/soft/xenosaga/img2/elza_03.jpg

{Chancellor Keiji (now 24 years old) sits at his desk drinking a cup of tea while reading a book}

Keiji: Hmmm...I heard John is around...Better pay him a visit...Maybe Alex is here also...Need to give him his birthday gift.

{Mireille (also 24) walks into the office, dragging behind her, her personal bow and several arrows}

Mireille: Honey, when are we going back to the Foundation? I'm getting bored of this...My arms are sore from practice...

{Keiji looks up from his book}

Keiji: Well...I was thinking of paying a visit with an old friend and our nephew.

{Keiji continues reading}

Mireille: Oh, I see...

{Mireille walks over to Keiji's desk}

Mireille: So...what have you been up to lately? Hmmm???

{Mireille lowers the book Keiji is reading and leans forward and lands a kiss on his lips. They kiss for several more second, then Keiji stops it by leaning back on his chair}

Keiji: You really must be bored...

Mireille: Mmmhmm...Tastes like...Hmmm...Jasmine tea...Am I right?

Keiji: Uh huh...

Mireille: So where is John and Alex? We haven't seen them for ages...

Keiji: I'll try to ask the bridge what their exact coordinates are...Well...I'll ask later...

Mireille: Ok...But first, before I leave and take a nap...

{Mireille leans forward to kiss Keiji again, by literally crawling across the desk. But then, as she makes it to the end of the desk, and her lips several inches away from Keiji's, her hand slips on the table, causing her to fall forward into Keiji's arms, who immediately reacted}

Mireille: Ow ow Ouch...

Keiji: Hehe...Clumsy Mireille...This should make it feel better...

{Keiji closes the gap between his and her lips as he holds her arm with one hand and her hand in his other hand, as he plays with the diamond ring on her finger}

OOC: Bored bored bored...
20-03-2004, 14:22
Then, a young knight burst into the office. 'Chancellor, (panting) sorry, sir. I have come at request from Master Skywalker, he sent me not long ago. I am here only to serve you. I hope my skills will become useful to you. My name is Juan Kenshi.
Techon
20-03-2004, 14:23
[OOC: Vinn is 25 years old, and is most likely going to be my main jedi character.]

"It is a pleasure to meet you as well Tenchi Masaki," Vinn said.

"So, Alex," Anakin asked. "What are you into?"
Lunatic Retard Robots
20-03-2004, 16:58
Lunatic Retard Robots
20-03-2004, 16:58
The corvette and its passengers look around for the nearest entrance into the temple.
Techon
20-03-2004, 17:40
A guard showed the corvettes passengers the way to the temple.
Lunatic Retard Robots
20-03-2004, 17:49
A guard showed the corvettes passengers the way to the temple.

"Oh, why thankyou. We need to see who's ever in charge of the temple's procurement needs. We have a cargo of new superconducting metals that you might be interested in, and a proposition for your government here."
CoreWorlds
20-03-2004, 18:44
[OOC: Vinn is 25 years old, and is most likely going to be my main jedi character.]

"It is a pleasure to meet you as well Tenchi Masaki," Vinn said.

"So, Alex," Anakin asked. "What are you into?"

OOC: Tenchi's nearing 30.

IC:
"I'm the #1 champion in video games, and no one else can beat me!" Alex gloated, while T.J. rolled his eyes.
"Me, I like to walk along nature trails and spot the cool creatures." T.J. beamed.
Arenumberg
20-03-2004, 19:39
OOC: Well here goes, basically, the heir to the Throne, Allana , did her own training in Kitorsan (Elven stuff, basic force powers and things like that) And has been training in the force now for 4 years, and is 15, she has come for the last part of the training here, before she refines it back home, she comes with an Aide, and 2 Royal Gaurds.

http://www.realm-o-tigger.com/tbwc/liv/newpics/LT_newscan05.jpg
15 Year Old Allana, Half Elf, Half Human, looks more mature than would be expected (thus no pointy ears at this age etc , they come later :P lol.)

Aide: "We near the planet Princess"

Allana: "ETA ?"

Gaurd 1: "5 minutes Princess"

Aide: "Request landing clearance, over"
-Noir-
20-03-2004, 19:41
Then, a young knight burst into the office. 'Chancellor, (panting) sorry, sir. I have come at request from Master Skywalker, he sent me not long ago. I am here only to serve you. I hope my skills will become useful to you. My name is Juan Kenshi.

OOC: I'm just going to ignore this right now...I was actually planning to meet up with John once we get his coordinates...(next time try having it like a message over the vid-phone...)
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{Inside the office. Keiji returns to his book, as Mireille walks out the door}

Mireille: So when are you going to get their coordinates?

Keiji: I called the bridge right when you arrived earlier...So i'll see you for dinner?

Mireille: Which resturant?

Keiji: Any...Just pick one...

Mireille: 'K

{Mireille walks out the door. The his intercomm starts to ring, Keiji inputs several commands into his touch-screen. His one of the bridge's communications officers appears on the screen}

Keiji: Yes?

Comm. Officer: Sir, we have John's coordinates...Should we change course right now?

Keiji: Immediately...

Comm. Officer: And we have also received a coded message from a...Juan Kenshi...A jedi night...I'm sending the message to you so you can view it.

Keiji: Ok...That is all...

Comm. Officer: Affirmative, sir.

{Keiji taps on the message icon on his view-screen}

[code:1:2a0152a62a]'Chancellor, (panting) sorry, sir. I have come at request from Master Skywalker, he sent me not long ago. I am here only to serve you. I hope my skills will become useful to you. My name is Juan Kenshi.[/code:1:2a0152a62a]

Keiji: Hmmm...Skywalker...I think John mentioned him once...

{Keiji sits back again and continues to read his book}
-Noir-
20-03-2004, 20:00
OOC: Here is how Mireille looks like, now. (The same Mireille as in the anime Noir = Mireille Bouquet)

-------------------------------I'll get a pic later--------------------------------------

OOC: I still need to get Keiji's pic (I was thinking of using Gaigun Kookai from Xenosaga...And I was also thinking Keitaro Urashima or Seta-San from Love Hina}

-------------------------------I'll get a pic later--------------------------------------
CoreWorlds
20-03-2004, 20:59
OOC: If that guy comes in whining about anime again... :P .
-Noir-
21-03-2004, 07:24
OOC: If that guy comes in whining about anime again... :P .

OOC: lol...The threads are full of anime when we participate in them...
-Noir-
21-03-2004, 07:31
Then, a young knight burst into the office. 'Chancellor, (panting) sorry, sir. I have come at request from Master Skywalker, he sent me not long ago. I am here only to serve you. I hope my skills will become useful to you. My name is Juan Kenshi.


OOC: And also if you're still going to participate in this thread...don't go barging into other peoples' PRIVATE offices like that...And you can't suddenly appear in a starship like that...kind of...Godmodding...I believe (magically appearing in places)...But I changed your post earlier...So this should be a learning experience for you...
21-03-2004, 13:18
OCC: Thanks, I'm new to all this, I don't really know these things. I just wanted to join in. :cry: Juan Kenshi (Kenshi for short) is a Jedi Knight straight from Luke's academy, after scoring top marks in all his tests. For an unknown reason, Skywalker has sent his star-pupil off to help the Chancellor. This will all be found out later on. And I only did this because I didn't want to mention your character's name, because you can get kicked out for making the slightest referance to another character. I saw the office thing as the only way of doing it without mentioning your name. This is what Kenshi looks like by the way:
http://www.fightingmaster.com/actors/%20jetli/dragon.jpg
Techon
21-03-2004, 14:33
[OOC: Oh no... Cunning Squirrels, he took over at least two peoples characters in the Matrix RP that I started. Not to mention got on someone elses nerves somewhere else. I swear, he is stalking me, he goes to every RP i go to...
Cunning Squirels, I will let you join. But you must not godmod, or break into peoples PRIVATE offices. Oh yah, a jedi can use the force to revieve his stress, and tiredness. So your guy shouldne't be panting.]
Arenumberg
21-03-2004, 14:39
bump?
Techon
21-03-2004, 15:05
Techon
21-03-2004, 15:06
[OOC: Sorry...]

"Landing clearance accepted, you are clear to land. Welcome to Yavin 4, the Jedi Academy."
Techon
21-03-2004, 15:17
OOC: If that guy comes in whining about anime again... :P .

God I wish you could actually give someone the boot from a thread...
-Noir-
21-03-2004, 19:04
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-Noir-
21-03-2004, 19:05
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-Noir-
21-03-2004, 19:11
[OOC: Oh no... Cunning Squirrels, he took over at least two peoples characters in the Matrix RP that I started. Not to mention got on someone elses nerves somewhere else. I swear, he is stalking me, he goes to every RP i go to...
Cunning Squirels, I will let you join. But you must not godmod, or break into peoples PRIVATE offices. Oh yah, a jedi can use the force to revieve his stress, and tiredness. So your guy shouldne't be panting.]

OOC: lol
21-03-2004, 19:24
OCC: You can't give someone the boot? Cool! Leprechauns will be making a come-back! (only joking!) Anyway...

Kenshi sat in his quarters. He couldn't work out why Luke had sent him to this terrible place. Over the years of training, he had grown to quite like Luke, and had learned to respect him in his last year at the academy. So why had he been sent away so quickly after he had passed so well? Maybe he was jealous, yes that had to be it.
But then... he was Mr. Skywalker. He could never be jealous of anyone, there was no-one for to be jealous of. It wasn't like the Chancellor was in bad need of a jedi. He wasn't really struggling or anything.
Kenshi could'nt think of a reason, so he gave up and called home on the intercom. He always did this when he was worried, since his father could give some such good advice. Hi father had been the great Hiroshima Kenshi, a truly great Jedi. He was the one had inspired Kenshi to become a jedi in the first place. And he was glad that he had. Luke had said that his skills would be aked for all over the glaxy, but no calls had come. No-one even spoke to him. Maybe that was why he had been sent. Maybe they felt sorry for him. kenshi kicked the wall in disgust. He hurt his toe.
21-03-2004, 19:25
OCC: You can't give someone the boot? Cool! Leprechauns will be making a come-back! (only joking! I'm serious now, i'll try not do any of that illegal stuf again.) Anyway...

Kenshi sat in his quarters. He couldn't work out why Luke had sent him to this terrible place. Over the years of training, he had grown to quite like Luke, and had learned to respect him in his last year at the academy. So why had he been sent away so quickly after he had passed so well? Maybe he was jealous, yes that had to be it.
But then... he was Mr. Skywalker. He could never be jealous of anyone, there was no-one for him to be jealous of. It wasn't like the Chancellor was in bad need of a Jedi. He wasn't really struggling or anything.
Kenshi could'nt think of a reason, so he gave up and called home on the intercom. He always did this when he was worried, since his father could give some such good advice. His father had been the great Hiroshima Kenshi, a truly great Jedi. He was the one had inspired Kenshi to become a Jedi in the first place. And he was glad that he had. Luke had said that his skills would be asked for all over the glaxy, but no calls had come. No-one even spoke to him. Maybe that was why he had been sent. Maybe they felt sorry for him. Kenshi kicked the wall in disgust. He hurt his toe.
-Noir-
21-03-2004, 19:29
OOC: Is Kenshi gay? He "likes" Luke Skywalker...Is it "like like"?

just wondering...how he put it sounds like it's like that...
21-03-2004, 19:56
OOC: Lol, he's not gay, it was just a mistake. And can someone at least mention him in one of their posts, it feels like I'm on my own here.
-Noir-
21-03-2004, 20:07
OOC: Lol, he's not gay, it was just a mistake. And can someone at least mention him in one of their posts, it feels like I'm on my own here.

OOC: Don't worry. I'll try to mention him later in my posts
21-03-2004, 21:45
OOC: That would be nice.
Arenumberg
21-03-2004, 21:46
http://www.sgtfretsurfer.com/Grilled-Sarlacc/c/speeders/6.jpg
The Sleek Arenumberg Transport "Royal Oak" Slid through the atmosphere, and settled on a landing pad.

"Gaurds, Aide, do as you see fit for now, i need to do some things" Said Allana

"Of Course Princess"

Allana Departed the transport, and waited to be greeted..
Techon
22-03-2004, 02:40
Cener greeted Allana, he walked to the landing pad and bowed before her.
"It is an honor to see you," He said cooly. "I am sorry Master Skywalker can't greet you, he is talking with another jedi at the moment."

[OOC: Is ir goddmodding if I destroy Earth?]
-Noir-
22-03-2004, 04:01
Cener greeted Allana, he walked to the landing pad and bowed before her.
"It is an honor to see you," He said cooly. "I am sorry Master Skywalker can't greet you, he is talking with another jedi at the moment."

[OOC: Is ir goddmodding if I destroy Earth?]

OOC: "ir" who is "ir" ??? I think it would be godmodding if you destroy the earth...
CoreWorlds
22-03-2004, 04:10
OOC: It will really mess up my nation's timeline as the majority is still on NS Earth at this time. Another 50 years, and we will founded our future capital planet, Coredia and other colonies. I also think it would be godmodding.
-Noir-
22-03-2004, 04:16
{Inside the Durandal. Chancellor Keiji sits quietly at his chair, still reading his book}

Keiji: Hmm...I better check on our ETA...

{Keiji opens up the intercom in on his computer. One of the operators on the ship appears in a window on the screen}

Keiji: Get me the bridge.

Operator: Yes, sir.

{After a few seconds, another Captain Williams appears in the window}

Man: Yes, Chancellor?

Keiji: Will, what is our ETA?

Will: We should arrive at the coordinates in about...More or less an hour...

Keiji: 'k...That's all.

Will: Yes, sir.

Keiji: Oh wait...Get the Elsa ready...It's easier to dock that ship with John's spacecraft...If I recall from last time...

Will: Yes, sir...Is that all sir?

Keiji: Mmmhmm...That is all.

{Keiji switches off the intercom, and returns to his book}

Keiji: Ok...Back to the book...

{Keiji looks curiously at the closed book he holds in his hands}

Keiji: Ummm...What page was I on again?
CoreWorlds
22-03-2004, 05:35
"Hey Anakin, how good are you at video games?" Alex asked, smirking. "Me, no one has beaten me."

Technically, several other people did manage to defeat him, but only because of what he claims are flukes. T.J. just looked around for small animals to catch.

"This is a nice place, Master." I commented. "Jungle trails to run through, the teeming life. I might like to send the boys here when they're a bit older, like 12 or so."
-Noir-
22-03-2004, 07:02
OOC: hey CW...where exactly are you...I umm...need the coordinates...or which planet...
Arenumberg
22-03-2004, 14:28
"I Understand Completely, I Am Allana, And you are?"
CoreWorlds
22-03-2004, 16:08
OOC: hey CW...where exactly are you...I umm...need the coordinates...or which planet...

OOC: Read the SW books, kid. Yavin 4. The fourth moon of the gas giant Yavin.
Techon
22-03-2004, 23:18
[OOC: Dammit, anyways, ir meant if. I was planning on having the Xan destroy Earth, because you know, it would be a major drawback for us, but I will do the next best thing.]

"My name is Cener Barith, I am a jedi," Cener said bowing again.

Luke
"Yes, it is a nice place," Luke said.
"I am awesome at them!" Anakin said. "I like to play the space combat ones."
Lunatic Retard Robots
23-03-2004, 01:47
A guard showed the corvettes passengers the way to the temple.

"Oh, why thankyou. We need to see who's ever in charge of the temple's procurement needs. We have a cargo of new superconducting metals that you might be interested in, and a proposition for your government here."

Ahem ahem.
CoreWorlds
23-03-2004, 02:21
"Hey, how about you and I play one?" Alex said. "Winner gets 10 credits."
He slapped a 10-credit chip on a table near them.

Then I had an idea. "If it's ok with you Master, I would like to test a student or two. See how well they're doing with their Force skills."
Techon
23-03-2004, 03:33
"Well," The guard said to the LRR man. "We aren't really a government run temple, we follow the jedi code. Soon enough though Master Skywalker will go to a meeting with the Techon leaders, you can discuss it there."

Anakin
"You are on!" Anakin exclaimed.
"Oh brother..." Jacen said.
"Anakin..." Jaina said to no avail though.

"That sounds like a reasonable idea," Luke said. "I have two special jedi at the ready to take on a master, if you will call it that. Vinn," He called calmly.
From behind them Vinn strolled up, hands crossed behind his back. "Yes?"
"How would you like to have Tenchi as a master, to see how well your skills are?"
Vinn's eyes opened wide. "I...I... Alright!" He exclaimed, his expression of shock replaced by a great joyful smile.
"Also," Luke said. "Ben Kirth."
"Him?" Vinn asked. "Alright..." He strolled off, to fetch his 'companion'
"Ben is a good jedi, but like most of them are, he is over confident," Luke explained.
-Noir-
23-03-2004, 05:00
OOC: hey CW...where exactly are you...I umm...need the coordinates...or which planet...

OOC: Read the SW books, kid. Yavin 4. The fourth moon of the gas giant Yavin.

OOC: im not really a big SW fan...
CoreWorlds
23-03-2004, 05:52
I smiled. "As I was once upon a time. I await Ben and Vinn."

"Let's see...I have Rogue Squadron III, Homeworld, Colony Wars, and Wing Commander. Choose your weapon." Alex smiled. T.J. just groaned.
-Noir-
23-03-2004, 08:02
{The Durandal arrives in the vicinity of the planet Yavin. Captain Williams paces back and forth across the bridge (It takes him a couple of minutes to go from one end to the other)}

Will: Hmmm...I better inform the Chancellor that we have arrived...

Comm Officer: Sir, we have picked up a CW transmission coming from Yavin 4...One of the moons, sir.

Will: That must be them...Prep the Elsa and get it ready to launch...I will contact the Chancellor.

Comm Officer: Yes, sir.

{Will walks over to his computer console and opens up the intercom on the monitor. The intercom window pops up on Keiji's screen}

Will: Sir, are you there?

Automatic Response: "I am not here at the moment. Please leave you name and your message after the beep."...........*beep*

Will: Ummm...Sir, we have arrived at our destination, Yavin 4. The Elsa is being readied for your departure. It is in the dock...terminal number 5.

{Keiji walks back into the office, after going to the restroom}

Keiji: Hmm...A message...

{Keiji taps on the flashing intercom icon on the touch screen}

Keiji: Hmm...Yavin 4...Haven't heard of this place before...Well...Looks like i've got to call Mireille and tell her to go to the Elsa.
Arenumberg
23-03-2004, 13:05
[quote="Techon"]
"My name is Cener Barith, I am a jedi," Cener said bowing again.
[quote]

"Pleased to meet you, Cener, i am here to finish the last portions of my training before i take the final test."
Techon
25-03-2004, 01:03
"Pleased to meet you to," Cener replied
Lunatic Retard Robots
25-03-2004, 02:03
"Well," The guard said to the LRR man. "We aren't really a government run temple, we follow the jedi code. Soon enough though Master Skywalker will go to a meeting with the Techon leaders, you can discuss it there."

"When do you think thaat will be? Also, is there anywhere we could go for a tour of the temple? It is quite an impressive structure."
"We also have a task, to search your archives for any mention of the history of what is known as the Karos ship graveyard."
Arenumberg
25-03-2004, 10:05
"So, where do i start Cener?"
-Noir-
25-03-2004, 10:29
{Outside the Elsa's terminal. Keiji meets up with Mireille}

Mireille: What took you so long?

Keiji: Had to pack some stuff up...

Mireille: 'K...

Keiji: Anything wrong?

Mireille: No, just thinking how much Alex has grown since the last time we saw him...

Keiji: Was saw him during Christmas, Mireille...I think he's doing just fine...Besides...I bet he's just been playing that video game we got him for Christmas also...

Mireille: You're right...So...Shall we?

Keiji: 'K, let's go.

{They walk onboard the Elsa which slowly pulls away from the terminal and slowly drifts through the hanger and out into space, where it turns on its fission propulsion systems}

http://www.gpara.com/special/soft/xenosaga/img2/elza_03.jpg
25-03-2004, 20:52
As Kenshi strode confidently behind the Chancellor, he asked him, 'Excuse me sir, but I have been at your service for two days now, and I have had nothing to do, is there anything I can do for you sir?'
CoreWorlds
25-03-2004, 21:22
I smiled. "As I was once upon a time. I await Ben and Vinn."

"Let's see...I have Rogue Squadron III, Homeworld, Colony Wars, and Wing Commander. Choose your weapon." Alex smiled. T.J. just groaned.

OOC: I await your response, Techon.
25-03-2004, 21:51
OOC: I'd trash you all at Rogue Squadron 3. And so would Kenshi. And maybe Gaspode.
Techon
25-03-2004, 21:53
[OOC:Cunning Squirels you are lucky I don't just have everyone ignore you]

"Follow me," Cener said.

"Umm," Anakin said "HomeWorld III"
Arenumberg
25-03-2004, 22:02
"Ok, lead on Cener."
CoreWorlds
25-03-2004, 22:57
On a hologame player, the two boys started playing Homeworld. They seemed to be matched head-to-head.

OOC:
I do believe it's nearly time for a planet to be destroyed somewhere, killing billions...
Lunatic Retard Robots
26-03-2004, 01:17
OCC: Techon, you, like, forgot my post again.
-Noir-
26-03-2004, 05:00
As Kenshi strode confidently behind the Chancellor, he asked him, 'Excuse me sir, but I have been at your service for two days now, and I have had nothing to do, is there anything I can do for you sir?'

OOC: how did you get on my ship...remember all i got was a message...so change your post...you are not on both the Elsa and the Durandal...got it? don't just go appearing everywhere from now on...
Techon
26-03-2004, 15:01
[OOC: Sorry LRR, I had tried to post one, but it didn't post, but I thought it did.]

"Soon enough" The guard answered. "In two days."

Re'queila
The planet rested peacefully, the lights from the cities easily seen in the shadow of the sun, to its right was its moon, Je'kelshia, cities built all over it as well. This was the second main system for Techon, the Rhool system. Second only to the home system of Techon.

Then, with a bright flash something amazing appeared in the air.
"Sire," An aid said, bowing before his leader, the leader of the Xan. "We have reached the system."
A figure, about 5'9" was looking out a transparisteel window, he turned and looked at the aid. He was wearing black robes, completely black, he had a big hood over his head, and his hands were oil black. His face was something on itself as well, there wasn't one per say. In place of a face was a dark black liquid pool, stretching throughout the hood as if it were a bowl, his face even had ripples running through it. He was the leader of the Xan, his name was Anu'Sul.
"Destroy it," He ordered in the deepest bass voice imaginable.
"Yes sir," the aid said.
The ships super weapon aimed at the planet.
CoreWorlds
26-03-2004, 16:10
OOC: What's the superweapon like? The one from ID4 or the one from Titan AE? Scary all the same...
Lunatic Retard Robots
27-03-2004, 00:08
[OOC: Sorry LRR, I had tried to post one, but it didn't post, but I thought it did.]

"Soon enough" The guard answered. "In two days."

Re'queila
The planet rested peacefully, the lights from the cities easily seen in the shadow of the sun, to its right was its moon, Je'kelshia, cities built all over it as well. This was the second main system for Techon, the Rhool system. Second only to the home system of Techon.

Then, with a bright flash something amazing appeared in the air.
"Sire," An aid said, bowing before his leader, the leader of the Xan. "We have reached the system."
A figure, about 5'9" was looking out a transparisteel window, he turned and looked at the aid. He was wearing black robes, completely black, he had a big hood over his head, and his hands were oil black. His face was something on itself as well, there wasn't one per say. In place of a face was a dark black liquid pool, stretching throughout the hood as if it were a bowl, his face even had ripples running through it. He was the leader of the Xan, his name was Anu'Sul.
"Destroy it," He ordered in the deepest bass voice imaginable.
"Yes sir," the aid said.
The ships super weapon aimed at the planet.

"Oh. So, where should we stay?"
Techon
10-05-2004, 14:15
"We have a visitors area at the west wing of the temple, we can escort you there," The guard said and did so.

[OOC: I am leaving out the description of the ship for the fun of it. Just to let you know.]
Arenumberg
19-05-2004, 16:43
bump, time to ressurect this RP, i beleive techon has lost his access to this site, so if i see him around on MSN i will post his replies.
Techon
24-05-2004, 22:53
[OOC: MY turn to ressurect it I am back! HAHAHAHHA!]