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A lesson in evil (WARNING: "R" rated material )

Automagfreek
16-01-2004, 03:35
OOC: If you have a weak stomach / constitution, please read no further. If you do so, you do at your own risk. You've been warned so please don't hijack this thread or run to the mods.

http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=78451
http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=73777

Past links.

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For many years now the Halls of the Dead lay quiet. The screams of the damned had faded into eternity and no longer echoed off the dank walls. With the return of Dreadfire also comes to return of the ultimate device of evil...The Halls of the Dead. Many a man decended into the Halls to meet an unspeakable fate, but it had been years since the torches were lit.....until now. With the rise of murders, rapists, child molesters and those that would undermine the Excessively Armed Empire, the dried up torches of the Halls have been re-lit. First on today's agenda was a man convicted of raping and killing 14 children and eating them. We was even spotted wearing the head of a teenage girl as a hat and parading through the streets drinking her blood.

The massive stone doors were opened and the torches that lines the corridors were lit. After everything was ready, this human piece of garbage decended into the darkness, never to return. After walking down the staircase occompanied by 6 heavily armed Sentinels, the first thing the man did was scream in terror at the sight of the best attraction at the Halls: the endless wall of corpses. Dried and decomposed, these were the bodies of those previously condemned. He walked past hundreds and hundreds of mangled skeletal bodies hanging off the walls and stacked on the floor. As he looked at one particular stiff, it's jaw bone fell off, and a large spider crawled out and walked over the face of the unfortunate soul. The man threw up instantly at this sight, babbling and sobbing, and the Sentinels pushed him further. The stench was near unbearable after ages of rot and ruin, and the man passed by the holding chambers. These chambers housed the condemned until they were to be killed, a place where one went mad. The dank stone floors were bathed in the light of the main chamber, and the man walked further.

Upon entering the room, his mouth went agape at the sight he saw: hundreds of brutal torture devices. From still vats of acid to chopping blocks, each device was permanently stained red. First stop was the rack, and the Sentinels strapped him in. Without a second to get confortable, the man was stretched repeatedly, his joints making snapping and popping noises. Finally, the Halls had heard a scream after all this time, and it seemed to excite the evil that dwelled there. Next stop was a large steel table with leather straps on both ends. He was forcibly slammed onto the table and locked down. The stand next to the table contained numerous sharp objects, and the executioner that had been standing there grabbed a long metal spike. Slender and sharp, the executioner jammed the spike under the fingernails of the man, prying them off. A shriek filled the room as one by one the man's fingers were violated by this spike, and after each nail was removed, the executioner moved towards his feet. The man looked at his hands, blood flowing freely from them. He began weeping uncontrollably at this sight, but his cries were interupted by the sound of a drill boring into the soles of his feet. The man's body thrashed and contorted as golf ball sized holes were bored out ever so slowly, and the executioner winched as small jets of blood covered him.

Next down the greusome line came the peeler, a massive bed with a large arm over the top. The man was carried over to this device and locked into it. With the flick of a switch, the machine kicked into life while sending sparks flying. The arm carried a large drum that had many holes in it, similar to a cheese grater. The drum began spinning and dropping lower and lower, ever so slowly. He began screaming again even before the device neared him, for he knew this would be truely painful. For sport, the executioner picked up a large pair of needle nosed pliers, and in a swift move drove them into the left eye of the condemned. Twisting it and turning it, the executioner removed his eye, dangling it in front of the man before brutally and forcibly removing his right. The man was starting to cough as blood ran from his empty sockets and into his mouth. The drum meanwhile had been getting lower and lower, and by now it was nearly on top of him. Slicing into his flesh nd severing the nerves in his skin, the grater began raking into the man's body, and a literal shower of blood followed. The man could not scream anymore for he had exhausted his voice. T'was too late anyways, because his chest and face had been raked clean off, and as the drum dropped lowered it cut into his arms and legs. After taking his nose and the skin on his chest, arms, and legs off, the drum raised, and gasoline was poured over the victim, causing his body to contort one final time. A single match was lit and tossed on the soon to be corpse, and the gas erupted into flame.

Damien watched this from the observation booth high above the main torture hall, and he chuckled a another parasite was removed from the world. Looks like the Halls have their newest edition in years. said Damien to himself as he looked at the body stop flailing, for death had finally come to the destroyer of children. His days of violating the innocent were over, and another body (if you could even call it that) was tossed on the pile.

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-AMF News Update-

Today a convicted child killer was put to death inside the fabled Halls of the Dead, a known torture facility in Automagfreek. Since Lord Dreadfire's return the Halls have been reopened to lower the violent crime level in AMF back down to nothing.

It's sad to see how this country has degenerated since my departure DAmien was quotted as saying. Maybe now people will think twice before doing the horrible things they do.

No further information is available, but we will break in with updates as they occur.


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OOC: Not my goriest post, but it should suffice.
A Few Rich People
16-01-2004, 03:50
8)

Nice post, redefinition of the words cruel and unusual (makes my disiplin seems like getting wrapped in silk heh). Then again, my people walk away from it (well usually).
New Genoa
16-01-2004, 03:54
<OOC: First on today's agenda was a man convicted of raping and killing 14 children and eating them.

Am I the only who actually found this humorous?>

IC: With the Halls reopened once more, New Genoa has made an outcry to fellow UN members to band together against the menace known as Automagfreek for violating human rights.

-Foreign Affairs-
Automagfreek
16-01-2004, 03:59
With the Halls reopened once more, New Genoa has made an outcry to fellow UN members to band together against the menace known as Automagfreek for violating human rights.

-Foreign Affairs-

Ah, New Genoa...the shining beacon of morality. :roll:

Those that take the lives of the weak and innocent forfeit their own rights. It is quite clear in AMF law the consequences of said actions, hence why we expect violent crime to go down to nothing yet again. Those that take the lives of children deserve a punishment harsher that what fire and steel can create. If you don't like it, turn off the TV.

http://207.44.246.95/40/9/upload/p3403.jpg (http://home.eznet.net/%7Edeck/fe/Finger%20Eleven_Slow%20Chemical.mp3)
---Damien Dreadfire---
-Supreme Dictator of AMF-
G.D.O.D.A.D
-C.o.E Member-
Ruler of The Ancient Republic of Greek Forces, The Silent Protectorate of Old Frankland, The Holy Kingdom of The Royal Knights, The Mentally Superior Republic of Arrogant Uber Geniuses, The Raving Lunatics of Hackers Demise
MegaTokyo-3
16-01-2004, 04:01
OOC: I had a character a long time ago who would definitely appreciate the kinds of things Damien does... I would bring him back, but since he was a literal god, I doubt anyone would appreciate the kind of technology he brought with him, either. ;)
Good post, though. :)
Super American VX Man
16-01-2004, 04:13
"Ah, good to see a revival of the Halls of the Dead."

The Führer turned off the TV and turned to his aides in the room, one of which was noticeably uncomfortable. He had that one exit the room, then turned to the others.

"I hope you took good notes, gentlemen. This Damien is...very creative."


http://www.angelfire.com/ns2/toxicvalley/images/hans.jpg
-Hans Müller
Der Führer
Automagfreek
16-01-2004, 04:36
OOC: Bump
The Eastern Bloc
16-01-2004, 05:23
We here in the Republic's Underground District find pleasure in a more long-term form of torture. We have a man who's currently entering the final stages of his execution; a full year after his ordeal began. A very slow process of torture is much more satisfying to me. Still though, to each his own.

http://207.44.246.95/147/67/upload/p995.jpg
TheSkull
Executioner for the Underground District
Automagfreek
16-01-2004, 05:29
http://207.44.246.95/147/67/upload/p995.jpg
TheSkull
Executioner for the Underground District

OOC: Two words: Bad Ass. :twisted:


We here in the Republic's Underground District find pleasure in a more long-term form of torture. We have a man who's currently entering the final stages of his execution; a full year after his ordeal began. A very slow process of torture is much more satisfying to me. Still though, to each his own.

Interesting methods. However, we prefer them bloody and short. We get backlogged on executions sometimes during peak crime season.


http://207.44.246.95/40/9/upload/p3403.jpg (http://home.eznet.net/%7Edeck/fe/Finger%20Eleven_Slow%20Chemical.mp3)
---Damien Dreadfire---
-Supreme Dictator of AMF-
G.D.O.D.A.D
-C.o.E Member-
Ruler of The Ancient Republic of Greek Forces, The Silent Protectorate of Old Frankland, The Holy Kingdom of The Royal Knights, The Mentally Superior Republic of Arrogant Uber Geniuses, The Raving Lunatics of Hackers Demise
Phyrric
16-01-2004, 05:51
I have never questioned any post by anyone, including a long while back when someone posted a thread being graphic about f**king his wife. This is when Marathon claimed to be 10 years old and the Mods deleted the nation that posted the sex thread for inappropriate behavior. I think it was Kitsylvania that screamed about it, but I could be wrong.

Now this leads me to ask, are the mods a bunch of total hypocrites when they say graphic sex is against policy but this is not?

Total curious here.

It is good writing but needs to be addressed as: was it "really" necessary? Even for a story line? Is it appropriate for kids on here? I know that marathon was not 10, but I do know a few as young as 14 and younger.

To each their own, but could it have been toned down from an NC-17 to a PG-13? lol
A Few Rich People
16-01-2004, 06:26
(OOC: Since we seem to have a little "How do you treat criminals" going here I thought I'd just flush out what I touched at before)

Our system is mostly nonlethal where all first offenders of class I infractions (illegal prodects, not using company time properly) are given a mandatory 24 hour in a Pain Dome, a clear higly conductive (high voltege low apage) cell with a constant vidio feed. Once brief touch on a wall and you can be sent bouncing back and forth untill your sentence is up. For each infraction after that it goes up a day.

Class II infractions (insighting a strike/riot, murder II, manslaughter, etc) are not only put in the domes for a minimun of 96 hours (four days) but they begin a harse re-education for them to fix their wrong doings and become production citizens once again (Second offender is upgraded to class III)

Class III infraction: Sensory Depravation. Using an inplant developed initially for mind/machine interface (the first research idea under the rule of Dneulfwa) a program is introduced cutting off all ingoing stimuli. However, out going mental feed (audio only) is recorded for all to here.

The most noted case and longest lasting in this situaton was infamous "25 kill Betty" who mercilesly slaughered 25 honest work-a-day joes and then sold their organ for illegal profit (a class II in it self).

She was recorded of lasting for 168 hours (one week) being kept alive with a catiter and IV for water and nutritional needs.

At the end here endless internal shrieks of rage and fear were quite bemusing, calling out to "God", to "Dnelufwa", "The Corperation", anyone or anything her mind could recall she cried out for. Untill the end, the magic little phrase that ends their treatment, "I'll do anything, anything you want, just let me go" sincerly of course.

At which point they are released from their prison, dressed in a desert brown kaekie (sp) and brought to the final stage.

A small table, a chair, and one automated cameral are all that are found in the well lit room. She sits down and the tapes begin to reel:

Preinstructed she says, "I Hillary Konlin, AKA "25 kill Betty", rounce my actions against the corperation and the families of the men I murdered. In restitution of my crimes against Dneluwa, Chairman of Mikosolf, and of the Mikosolf Corperation itself I offer my own life."

Reaching to the small table, grabing the .44 caliber single shot pistol, she brings it to her head, and in an audiable whisper, "For the Corperation, may it endure till the end of days," she fires shattering bone, muscel, brain, and flesh, killing her instantly.

The camera clicks off and the disposers come in, hurl the corpse into an fertilizer plant shoot and the gun along its way to be melted and reforged for the next self redemption.

In conclusion we do not belive in bloody and violent ways, we prefer deteration and psycological abuse. As well as everyone knowing that if they knew about a crime and do not report it they share the criminals fate, we call in "competition", to the brutal ways of AMF and TEB.
Automagfreek
17-01-2004, 00:41
I have never questioned any post by anyone, including a long while back when someone posted a thread being graphic about f**king his wife. This is when Marathon claimed to be 10 years old and the Mods deleted the nation that posted the sex thread for inappropriate behavior. I think it was Kitsylvania that screamed about it, but I could be wrong.

Now this leads me to ask, are the mods a bunch of total hypocrites when they say graphic sex is against policy but this is not?

Total curious here.

It is good writing but needs to be addressed as: was it "really" necessary? Even for a story line? Is it appropriate for kids on here? I know that marathon was not 10, but I do know a few as young as 14 and younger.

To each their own, but could it have been toned down from an NC-17 to a PG-13? lol

OOC: [violet] stated that threads of this nature are alright as long as there are warnings. Now, I specifically asked not to have discussion about morals in this thread. Direct all OOC comments about the nature of this thread here: http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=78453
Zedra
17-01-2004, 00:54
OOC: I think [violet] and the mods allow these things WHEN YOU PUT IN WARNINGS. EOTED made a quite, graphic, lesbian sex scene in one of his/her threads

IC:

Theallas watched from a secret base, "Ahh I see Deamen is up to his old ammusments. Good, every one, take notes."

Message to Deamen:

"I see you are up to your old practices again, while I find that more unconventional means can be more potent, from what I have heard, your means definatly sufice."

OOC: Thelasi torture is more mental mind games. Large holo-projectors (Star Trek stuff) generate illusions of terror and horror. Most often, the loved ones of the victim being raped then murdered. Childhood homes burned to the ground that type of stuff. Then, real elements are mixed in. (Note now, Theallas does NOT use this next step, Emperor Netari does), the victim is ACTUALY raped repeatadly by soldiers. Slowly, more real elements are mixed in. In the case when Netari wants the person to serve him, a figure, maybe Netari himself, maybe a loyal Force Commander, is step up as a "good-guy" saving the victim from more rape. Eventualy, the victim will become so attached to the target that they will take any order that is given to them.
New Genoa
17-01-2004, 02:54
With the Halls reopened once more, New Genoa has made an outcry to fellow UN members to band together against the menace known as Automagfreek for violating human rights.

-Foreign Affairs-

Ah, New Genoa...the shining beacon of morality. :roll:

Those that take the lives of the weak and innocent forfeit their own rights. It is quite clear in AMF law the consequences of said actions, hence why we expect violent crime to go down to nothing yet again. Those that take the lives of children deserve a punishment harsher that what fire and steel can create. If you don't like it, turn off the TV.

http://207.44.246.95/40/9/upload/p3403.jpg (http://home.eznet.net/%7Edeck/fe/Finger%20Eleven_Slow%20Chemical.mp3)
---Damien Dreadfire---
-Supreme Dictator of AMF-
G.D.O.D.A.D
-C.o.E Member-
Ruler of The Ancient Republic of Greek Forces, The Silent Protectorate of Old Frankland, The Holy Kingdom of The Royal Knights, The Mentally Superior Republic of Arrogant Uber Geniuses, The Raving Lunatics of Hackers Demise

Beacon of morality? How do you define morality? We're talking about human rights here... torturing and then murdering murderers is barbaric. Resorting to dark age punishments really shows your savagery and lack of civilization indeed. Your time will come Damien of Automadfreek. Your time will come. Leaders of the free world will not stand by for long while lives are being TORN apart literally. We UN nations will unite and put an end to these violations of UN laws. Believe me.

-Foreign Affairs-
Automagfreek
17-01-2004, 06:33
Beacon of morality? How do you define morality? We're talking about human rights here... torturing and then murdering murderers is barbaric. Resorting to dark age punishments really shows your savagery and lack of civilization indeed. Your time will come Damien of Automadfreek. Your time will come. Leaders of the free world will not stand by for long while lives are being TORN apart literally. We UN nations will unite and put an end to these violations of UN laws. Believe me.

-Foreign Affairs-

While you choose to baby your convicts, we choose to make them feel true pain; the same pain they dished out to the innocent. An eye for an eye my friend, the punishment suits the crime. There is not a damn thing anybody is going to do about it, because human rights are subject to opinion. While I believe the innocent should be cared for greatly, I also believe that the wicked should not be left alive to poison the innocent.

While your child rapers sit comfortably in your prisons, our are taking their last breaths. Say what you will, but in the end I'm right.


http://207.44.246.95/40/9/upload/p3403.jpg (http://home.eznet.net/%7Edeck/fe/Finger%20Eleven_Slow%20Chemical.mp3)
---Damien Dreadfire---
-Supreme Dictator of AMF-
G.D.O.D.A.D
-C.o.E Member-
Ruler of The Ancient Republic of Greek Forces, The Silent Protectorate of Old Frankland, The Holy Kingdom of The Royal Knights, The Mentally Superior Republic of Arrogant Uber Geniuses, The Raving Lunatics of Hackers Demise
The Eastern Bloc
17-01-2004, 06:43
OOC: Two words: Bad Ass. :twisted:


OOC: If you'd like I could toss over the full "1024x768" version. I'll just uh... what's your email again?
Automagfreek
17-01-2004, 06:51
OOC: Two words: Bad Ass. :twisted:


OOC: If you'd like I could toss over the full "1024x768" version. I'll just uh... what's your email again?

automagfreek@yahoo.com
Sketch
17-01-2004, 07:09
With the reopening of the Halls of Death, the legacy of the venerable Damien Dreadfire has truly returned. For too long we have watched the great nation of AMF languish in the inept hands of Ryane. May destiny continue to look favorable upon Damien and his people.
Automagfreek
17-01-2004, 07:10
With the reopening of the Halls of the Dead, the legacy of the venerable Damien Dreadfire has truly returned. For too long we have watched the great nation of AMF languish in the inept hands of Ryane. May destiny continue to look favorable upon Damien and his people.

And may the people of Sketch be blessed with great fortune and a favorable smile from the Gods!

http://207.44.246.95/40/9/upload/p3403.jpg (http://home.eznet.net/%7Edeck/fe/Finger%20Eleven_Slow%20Chemical.mp3)
---Damien Dreadfire---
-Supreme Dictator of AMF-
G.D.O.D.A.D
-C.o.E Member-
Ruler of The Ancient Republic of Greek Forces, The Silent Protectorate of Old Frankland, The Holy Kingdom of The Royal Knights, The Mentally Superior Republic of Arrogant Uber Geniuses, The Raving Lunatics of Hackers Demise
Automagfreek
17-01-2004, 08:37
OOC: Bump for the night.
New Genoa
17-01-2004, 16:56
Beacon of morality? How do you define morality? We're talking about human rights here... torturing and then murdering murderers is barbaric. Resorting to dark age punishments really shows your savagery and lack of civilization indeed. Your time will come Damien of Automadfreek. Your time will come. Leaders of the free world will not stand by for long while lives are being TORN apart literally. We UN nations will unite and put an end to these violations of UN laws. Believe me.

-Foreign Affairs-

While you choose to baby your convicts, we choose to make them feel true pain; the same pain they dished out to the innocent. An eye for an eye my friend, the punishment suits the crime. There is not a damn thing anybody is going to do about it, because human rights are subject to opinion. While I believe the innocent should be cared for greatly, I also believe that the wicked should not be left alive to poison the innocent.

While your child rapers sit comfortably in your prisons, our are taking their last breaths. Say what you will, but in the end I'm right.


http://207.44.246.95/40/9/upload/p3403.jpg (http://home.eznet.net/%7Edeck/fe/Finger%20Eleven_Slow%20Chemical.mp3)
---Damien Dreadfire---
-Supreme Dictator of AMF-
G.D.O.D.A.D
-C.o.E Member-
Ruler of The Ancient Republic of Greek Forces, The Silent Protectorate of Old Frankland, The Holy Kingdom of The Royal Knights, The Mentally Superior Republic of Arrogant Uber Geniuses, The Raving Lunatics of Hackers Demise

And what happens, O infalliable Damien, if the convicted is actually INNOCENT? No law system is perfect...

-Foreign Affairs-
Trixia
17-01-2004, 17:16
Trixia would like to say it congratulates Automadfreek on it center. We feel it a just way to deal with evil doers. And are thinking of making our own such centre.

Wedge Drywood
Head of Dicipline
The Silver Turtle
17-01-2004, 17:29
OOC: R Rated? Bah! Weak stomach? Bah! A nice cheery post for once, AMF
IC:
We applaud Damien's anti-crime efforts. They can only serve to better the world.
Santa Barbara
17-01-2004, 17:31
OOC: How is it being evil to kill a child molester/cannibal type?

You'd be more evil if you, say, promoted him to a high level position in your government.

Just a thought.
Automagfreek
17-01-2004, 21:07
And what happens, O infalliable Damien, if the convicted is actually INNOCENT? No law system is perfect...

-Foreign Affairs-

We have had no such incidents to date, the Far Seers have yet to condemn an innocent person. While I'm sure it may possibly happen someday, all I can say is this: No law system is perfect. (Sound familiar?) Innocent men are executed everywhere, some in more brutal fashions than ours (if that's possible). But we ahve had no such incidents yet, because the condemned is not taken to the Halls unless there's 100% proof they did it. Catching somebody who parades through the streets with a girl's head as a hat is usually pretty easy to convict.


http://207.44.246.95/40/9/upload/p3403.jpg (http://home.eznet.net/%7Edeck/fe/Finger%20Eleven_Slow%20Chemical.mp3)
---Damien Dreadfire---
-Supreme Dictator of AMF-
G.D.O.D.A.D
-C.o.E Member-
Ruler of The Ancient Republic of Greek Forces, The Silent Protectorate of Old Frankland, The Holy Kingdom of The Royal Knights, The Mentally Superior Republic of Arrogant Uber Geniuses, The Raving Lunatics of Hackers Demise