Senluii
19-12-2003, 17:15
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(OOC- Somebody told me to move this from general to the Nationstates thread. I hope I got it right this time...)
OOC- Hi. I've been trying to write a book for a while (in four years I've restarted 14 times) but I've hit 'the wall' and could really do with hearing something really atmospheric. You have my word that I will not take anything you write (as if I could ever get anything published), though I will not be offended if you keep the really good ideas to yourself. This is not part of the book and just something I'll think up as I go along...
IC-
Aelamyn leaned against the sturdy parapet as he took from the quiver at his waist a long, slender arrow, and watched the silhouetted figures around the outer wall moving in exhaustively drilled patterns. Lowering the shaft onto his bowstring, a thin golden cord woven from the hair of the fairest Kenar, he closed his right eye and focussed on a single figure. He drew the arrow back to his shoulder, his breath becoming an icy vapour, obstructing his view as the bow shuddered under the tension of the string. Aelamyn blew a braid of silver hair from his eye. Finally he released the arrow, the fletched blade arcing gracefully into the air and into the silhouette, which instantly fell forward over the wall and onto the short grass below. As a high-pitched cry resounded around the bailey, Aelamyn ducked behind the wall and faded back into the shadows.
(OOC- Somebody told me to move this from general to the Nationstates thread. I hope I got it right this time...)
OOC- Hi. I've been trying to write a book for a while (in four years I've restarted 14 times) but I've hit 'the wall' and could really do with hearing something really atmospheric. You have my word that I will not take anything you write (as if I could ever get anything published), though I will not be offended if you keep the really good ideas to yourself. This is not part of the book and just something I'll think up as I go along...
IC-
Aelamyn leaned against the sturdy parapet as he took from the quiver at his waist a long, slender arrow, and watched the silhouetted figures around the outer wall moving in exhaustively drilled patterns. Lowering the shaft onto his bowstring, a thin golden cord woven from the hair of the fairest Kenar, he closed his right eye and focussed on a single figure. He drew the arrow back to his shoulder, his breath becoming an icy vapour, obstructing his view as the bow shuddered under the tension of the string. Aelamyn blew a braid of silver hair from his eye. Finally he released the arrow, the fletched blade arcing gracefully into the air and into the silhouette, which instantly fell forward over the wall and onto the short grass below. As a high-pitched cry resounded around the bailey, Aelamyn ducked behind the wall and faded back into the shadows.