NationStates Jolt Archive


Power Vacuum (Crime, CO-RP, 2033)

imported_El Hefe
20-11-2003, 20:55
Feet pounded on metal grating as Estaban ran through the refinery. He had ducked in here to escape the assassin he could hear chasing him through the twisting maze of pipes.

His bodyguard was dead - his blood and brains still clung to Estaban's shirt where the sudden shotgun blast had sprayed them. The body was in his car outside sprawled over the passengers seat. He didn't know if they had meant to kill him in the first shot and missed, or whether they were intending to hound him before they killed him.

Panting heavily he tried to squeeze his 290 pound body through a narrow opening. He was narrowly aware of the pain as his ribs compressed and expanded, grating as he pressed through. He could still hear the assassin, or perhaps it was someone else. No matter.

He had never used it, even in his rise to the top, but he still had it. Estaban pulled out the heavy revolver he had at the small of his back. Often he had used it to intimidate someone - now the thought of using it to kill someone caused the bile to rise in his throat. Narrowly he remembered to thumb the safety off. Would the rounds, loaded nearly eleven years ago, still fire?

The pounding of rubber on metal came closer and he pressed into the shadows trying to hide his bulk. It had been an asset once. He remembered shoving the skinny pushers who worked for him around. Once he had put a man through a sheetrock wall. Now the bulk worked against him.

The footsteps came closer, and he risked a quick peek out into the corridor. He saw the man - or was it a woman? - moving their way carefully down the corridor. They walked through the gap and spotted something, perhaps a torn piece of shirt, hanging there. This was his chance...

Leaning out he pointed his revolver at the figure and pulled the trigger.

*CLUNK*

Misfire. He pulled again, but the figure was diving to the side already.

*BOOM*

The recoil suprised him. He had chosen the .454 revolver because of the intimidating size - shooting it had only been secondary. Still he kept his grip on it, and brought it back down attempting to line up on the figure in the shadows.

*CRACK-CRACK-CRACK*

Esteban was vaguely aware of the pain as something hit him in the shoulder. His aim was thrown off but he pulled the trigger again anyway.

*BOOM*

He could hear the bullet ricochette down the corridor. He tried to bring the gun back down, but his arm had stopped working.

*CRACK-CRACK-CRACK*

This time he felt the wet smack of bullets hitting flesh. His hand went to his stomach. His ample girth had protected him in a way. He was bleeding, but he might live if he could kill this person and get to a hospital. Pressing back into the shadows he held the revolver one-handed. When they came around the corner he would kill them.

For a minute he waited, blood spreading over the front of his shirt. The revolver was heavy in his left hand - his right hung useless at his side. A footstep, then another and another. They were right there...

He saw movement - too low he knew immediately - and fired. The assassin had rolled across the opening to lay on their side. The round went through empty space as Esteban saw the muzzle flashes for a moment before the world went dark.

Porto Yello News 7 Broadcast

"Today's big story: Power Vacuum at the top. In a single night of violence the top 5 cartel bosses in the western city of Santo Maria were gunned down by unknown assassins. The bodies were discovered throughout the morning by workers or travelers. The government has not yet prepared a statement but our sources say the army was not involved. This raises the spectre of a power struggle inside the cartels to fill the vacuum..."

OOC: This RP is meant to revolve around a new cartel that attempts to rise to power in the new power vacuum. Single characters only please, no super-humans, telepaths, etc. This is set in the year 2033 in a 2nd world nation so the tech is approximately the same as 2003. You do not have to play a character from your home nation.

For background on El Hefe see www.pacifier.com/~cziller/elhefe.html
imported_El Hefe
20-11-2003, 21:38
Sputters came from under the hood of the old Chevy then it died. Marcos cranked the key again for the 3rd time in as many blocks and gunned the engine. He had stolen the car three blocks ago. It had been sitting there with the windows down and the keys on the front seat. He knew why now.

Swearing at the engine Marcos cranked it until it turned over and roared back to life. Then he cursed the owner. His friend next to him laughed nervously while clutching the shotgun on his lap. The plan was simple - take advantage of the confusion and chaos from last night to hit a rival gang and grab their turf. Then they could expand a little and maybe take out some other smaller gangs.

In the back seat Marco's girlfriend and her brother sat with their guns ready as well. She had a pistol with a silencer on it and he had somehow gotten his hands on a old American Squad Automatic Weapon (SAW). Both stared at the adobe in the alley until they started moving again - then they started looking for their targets.

The car moving out of the alley and toward their destinate - an old building with a crumbling front wall pocked with bullets from fights past.

OOC: The three people in the car aside from Marcos are up as characters. Come'on - you know you want to rise to the top of your own criminal empire...
Platonic
21-11-2003, 01:21
OOC: This is for personal enjoyment only and should not be taken as example of my citizenry ;-)

OOC(2): let me know if this seems in appropriate :-)

Sarivo was nervous. More specifically he was really nervous.

The reason why were quite simple. First he always felt a little naseuas when he was in the back seat. Secondly they were in the middle of scorpion territory. Finally he really wasn't sure if he trusted the stupid gringo wannabe who sold him this gun!

"gotta relax" he thought to himself "won't be able to aim worth a damn if I'm nervous"

*starts breathing slower*

*then notices a guy coming down the street with a seemingly purposeful and measured gait.*

"CRAP is that a cop!" he exclaims

"uuhhh I mean is that a cop" he whispers
imported_El Hefe
21-11-2003, 01:32
Marcos hunched down in the seat - he had an Ingram on his knees but he moved it to the floor as they moved closer.

"I don't think so... but he might be a hitter. Or a bodyguard..."

The car rolled past, and the man looked in but Marcos was focused on the road ahead.

"Just another block - get ready."

They could all see the building front now. Five people stood outside smoking and talking. As they got closer they could see the distinctive scorpion tattoos training down the right arm of several of the gang. They all wore large hunting knives in back sheathes - their 'stinger'.
Platonic
21-11-2003, 01:52
"Uh Marcos, maybe you should give us a quick run down on that plan again." whispered Sarivo nervously

Sarivo has the SAW between his legs so the guy walking by probably doesn't notice.

The safety is on btw... (OOC:Thank god)
imported_El Hefe
21-11-2003, 02:24
Marcos sighed. He had gone over it ten times, but he would do it again.

"We drive past - you two shoot everyone you can. Then we turn at the end of the block and hop out. They will chase us, and we can ambush them and kill some more of them. If we are lucky we kill them all. My brother's girlfriend knows someone who says there are only six of them. So if we kill these five we only have 1 more to kill."
Pilon
21-11-2003, 20:57
#tag#
Platonic
22-11-2003, 02:28
Sarivo took a deep breath, took the saftey of the SAW and levered it into a little more accessible position.

"Ok ready to go bro" whispered Sarivo
imported_El Hefe
26-11-2003, 23:55
For Marcos time suddenly slowed as they approached. He could see every action as Juan next to him pulled the shotgun up, flipped off the safety and put it out the window.

The lone Scorpion who saw this looked on for a moment, a quizical expression on his face that soon turned to startled panic. With a yell he pushed the boy across from him away. Then the shotgun roared and his torso erupted in blood as he spun away from the blast. Then another blast caught a second gang member in the back and sent him lurching forward like a puppet with the strings cut.

Behind him Marcos heard a 'phht' and felt something hit the top of his head. Another gang member fell clutching his leg. 3 down, 2 to go...
Tor Yvresse
27-11-2003, 00:01
Tag, will be back soon. (I lost the link, and I still need to design me gang)
Platonic
27-11-2003, 00:52
Sarivo shivered slightly as lined the sights up on the group of Scorpions. As he noticed Marcos bring up the Ingram he squeezed down on the trigger of the SAW.

The flare of light was truely impressive and almost instantly destroyed his night vision, he barely managed to keep the dim silouettes of his targets in the sights as the SAW bucked against his shoulder. After a pair of short bursts that seemed to last much longer then they really did Sarivo kicked the door open and braced himself against the frame ready to jump to the ground and head for some cover.

(ooc: I am assuming it's night, even though I don't think it says anywhere else previous)
imported_El Hefe
27-11-2003, 01:09
Marcos hit the accelerator and roared down to the end of the block. Swerving around the corner he slowed just long enough for everyone to hop out. Picking up a handy brick he dropped it on the accelerator and sprinted into the shadow of a building. The street lights cast their glow over the rundown neighborhood, and Marcos could see dozens of lights come on as people reacted to the shots.

How many had they gotten? Marcos was sure Juan had killed at least two. Saviro's shots had blinded him and he couldn't see what had happened to the other three.

"Stay down - if they don't come in 2 minutes we can sneak down this alley and in the back door..."