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Once upon a time, there was a woman. A woman created to such perfection, that she had earned the word. Created in a lab by careless scientists. She would not have a soul. She would be used in combat, she would have no free will. She would be at their disposal. They were wrong.
Once upon a time, there was an angel. An angel of the highest rank...a seraphim. One of the only ones remaining in the world. She was sent to earth with a purpose. She could have been born like a regular person, but the powerful soul of Azrael, the seraphim, was sent into a body that was, created in a lab. She would not have a soul. They were wrong.
Once upon a time, there was a company. A company that had created such perfection, were so safe, until the woman awoke. Seven days, and her journey of distruction would begin for them. They had made an error. This woman contained a soul, and one no less than an seraphim...the seraphim Azrael. The glass was unbreakable. They were wrong.
Once upon a time, an angel got her wings. The soul worked through the body, forming rapidly wings upon her back. And with those wings, she broke through the unbreakable glass. Within seven days, the lab was in ruins. Ravelyn...that's what the scientists had called her...and that's what she would be called for years to come.
Once upon a time, there was a land. A land barren of all things with an ocean none the better. Ravelyn changed this with her hands, and shaped the land. It grew with life, and later became known as the Ambrosial Coasts. She walked along the beach every day...waiting for something to befall her.
Once upon a time, there was a man. If a man is what you'd call him. An anceint vampire of many years looked upon the angel, and decided he wanted nothing else. He would have her if it would mean his death. Thrown off by his kindness and love for her, the angel fell into his embrace. He was the one to form the only angelic vampire that will ever walk this earth, and soon, her touch may be gone, but not forgotten..never forgotten.
Once upon a time, there was a ruler. Benevolent and just to all that looked for justice. She was loved by her people, and feared by her enemies. She was the angel of light and savior to her people. She was the angel of death and destroyer of her enemies. There came a time, when the angelic vampire reached the ranks of an ancient. She maintained both blood lines...which was hard to do. She ruled over the land for millenia, and the people never saw a shadow of her passing. Ravelyn Shentavo.
Once upon a time, there was a son. The son of Ravelyn and Daja was named Qui. He became known as the mindbreaker as time went on.Being known to prophesize of something in just years to come. And everytime he did so, the prophesies came true. He was strong, quick, and hot tongued. Years passed, and the day came when he was considered an ancient.
Once upon a time, he disappeared. Daja left Ravelyn, alone in her tears. She swore to never feel that way again about anyone that crossed her path. She left her love for Daja behind, and hardened her heart. With her son, she sired others worthy of the eternal embrace. Genesis, Seni, Seth, Mar, Kenja, Azari, and Kain. They became her family, and loved her as she did them. They inherited her name of Shentavo. They were her kin.
Once upon a time, she fell in love. Ravelyn fell in love with a man named Vaughn. They went through so much together, even going so far as the reaches of heaven and the fire and brimstone of hell. Nothing could part their love for eachother. Their love was eternall, as was their lives...or so it was most beleived.
Once upon a time, jealousy drove him mad. Daja remained quite, knowing that Ravelyn had never felt the way he had, she had been under his entrance. But even now he could see her power growing. He could never stand to see the two together, nor see his eyes upon her face. One dark night, he tried to steal back his love. Force his love back into his arms. In the end, there was only one remaining. Ravelyn had killed her own sire.
Once upon a time, there was a father. In her early years, she met a being named Corothisia. He was like a father to her and protected her till the end...
Once upon a time, there was a prophecy. A prophecy made by her son, and his never were wrong. He said that a great evil would come, and her purpose for being would be fufilled. She set off training harder, but she had perfected everything she could. Her power was at an all time high. But it wouldn't be enough to save her in the end. The apocolypse was coming...and her purpose, after all these millenia, was to stop it.
Once upon a time, there was a ledgend. A ledgend of a angelic vampire that ruled over the lands. Of such strength and power, yet so fragile just the same. She fought bravely over many centuries for her people. Then there came a day, a dark and freezing day. When clouds hung ominous over the skies. And Ravelyn Shentavo finally faced her destiny...
Once upon a time, there came an end...the end... the end...the end?

OOC: However, that end won't come until we've gone through the rest opf this RP. BTW, who's allowed in?

ooc: Oh I know..I just had to write the beginning first. It will take place after all the other threads are finished up. Haraki, do you seriously think that you would not be invited? :lol:
Invite:
Corothisia, Eclipse (Rave and Seth, semi Alexiel)- Haraki
Vaughn, Witz (Rave and Genesis)- Underaloz
Joshua (Kenja)-Phalanix
James (Rave)- Iuthia
Kain (Rave and Azari) -Kain Igneraus
Armmada(Rave)-Old Brittania
Domino(Rave)-Crimmond

Yay, I get two characters!

Ahem ... I mean ... Right. I gotta go. Don't RP without me.

It won't start till Underaloz gets back and my several other threads are finished. :lol: Give or take two weeks lol.

OOC:Arg the wait will kill us all! But meh I got coffee :P

:P lol. Hey wait! I want coffee!

OOC:It taste like bad chicken. :shock: Na just messing. I'M HYPER NOW!!!!

:P

Joshua:*starts bouncing off the walls...literaly*

Alright...let's stop, I don't want this thread to be all hijacked before we start lol.

AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW!!! Ok then *keeps bouncing* The movie threed is dieing down aswell

OOC: There can't be an interruption from Valinon? Awwww. Ah, well, I will merely watch with feigned disappointment.

ooc: No...sorry. It's a character rp...IF you want to send one of your characters..but basically it's us verses the apocolypse...be prepared for some characters to die.

OOC:Hey shoul I let Phoenix in just for the sake of backhanding Joshuha with Qui? :lol:

ooc: Naw..there will be no backhanding..
Qui; :shock: What?!!
Sorry Qui...this is an extremely dramatic/serious rp.

Phoenix:DAMN IT!!!!!
Joshuha:HAHAHA *hit his head on a tree branch* DAMN IT!

do you like the beginning?

Ya realy nice.
Joshua:*just grumbles*
He hasn't had his morning beer
Joshua:*starts strangling some random person*

OOC: Is this far future? Or is it near the present?

near the present.

OOC: oh okay, I will look on and see if Rave dies,

I hope not :cry:

The end is already determined for all of my characters....
Only two Shentavoes will remain, and seven will die. Not going to say which ones....but it will suprise you.

and you can post all ooc on this thread, I'll just copy and paste the first post to a new topic when we will begin.

Joshua:I HAD BETTER NOT DIE!!!!
Phoenix:*puts Joshua into a sleeper hold knocking him out* He just dosn't shut up

Qui: I swear to God if I die....
Mar: What the hell about me?
Seni: I healed Joshua...com'mon!
Azari: No way are you gonna touch me...I can't speak...I didn't even get to get married yet...
Kenja: I love Joshua! Common I don't want to die
Genesis: *cough* Witz *Cough* must...stay...pleaseeeeee
Seth: What about Eclipse? You can't knock me off...
Alexeil: Don't kill me! I'm cool...and don't you touch Coro!
Rave: :roll: I mean common...I'm the leader of this country...and Vauhgn...I love him so much. And love can conquer all? Listen Ms. Writer...I don't want to die...I want to be with my fiance, get married, *bip*, go on wild and crazy threads and have a good time...???

Joshua:If I die consider your ass haunted!
Phoenix:Don't look at me for answers. Now time to go with my drinking buddy...DEATH!!!
Death:Come on Phoenix I'm thristy

hey we'll start taking bets....
Which two characters will be left? Which seven will die?

Joshua:DAMN IT!!!!
Death:Does he ever shut up?

lol

Death:Why the hell am I here in the first place?
Um.....look over there a army of midgit flesh eating zombies *runns away*

Kain: HA! I am not even a Shentavo anymore! I cannot go for the chop!

lol...

NO you misunderstand. 7 of MY characters will die...what you do with yours i don't care lol....but it will be greast future rping once you find out the twist ending. but shhh for now.

Joshua:You had better not kill off Kenja or hell is gona have a feild day
Phoenix:KILL OFF JOSHUA!!!1
Joshua:I heard that

hey hey...can we kill off joshua? lol j/k

Rave can you please check upon "This is a Tale of Love" and start talking to Kain...some character devolpment there for sure. Say that Daniella is not there for the time being. Sorry for highjacking but I want to continue.

This is starting when what rps are finished?

yup

Tag...

Damn... I'm going to have to make sure I don't start any more large RP threads, I've got a back log I can't catch up on currently (I'm still ill) and I want to do some interesting things...

For example:

Unknown citizens of Iuthia (http://www.nationstates.net/forum/viewtopic.php?p=1790605) - Based on vampires (good and bad...) not to mention a small number of Imbued humans... all of which is based of the WoD systems.

Yevon Missionaries - I have a small amount of backlash from The Bevelle Empire's civil war, hitting my one and only Yevon temple.

The Beginning - Lady Amanda's RP, alot of detial being put into her character (by me, I'm trying to improve my writing style, plus I think it is making Amanda (OOC) feel better about RP. Don't know where I'm going to go with it though...

Continuation of Vampire Conference - I'm less invovled now that I've officially lost the Wisp, not that I won't be doing alot of searching, setting bounties and generally asking alot of questions... need to see where it all goes once Rave is back from holiday.

Numberous Conventional Military RP - I'm part of a few alliences and they all keep getting prepared for this and that. Basically becuase it's easier to think of something for it I do alot of that these days.


I have to admit though, it's nice to see your characters past put into one large passage, it saves me digging through 40+ pages of past to find out basic background... of course, James doesn't really know alot about Rave's past, so it doesn't matter all that much. He knows enough to know he's over his head and that he should offer what support he can.

Anyways... I'm tagging this thread so I can find it later... it's been pretty hard to keep track of some things I'm meant to be doing.

Edited to add link, basically I'm proud of this new storyline I'm working into my nation, it shouldn't leave the nation or affect any Vampire RP threads, becuase I don't intend the characters to stay in use outside of the nation. But I hope it will be one of my best storylines ever.

I'm sorry to hear you're ill....i hope you get better soon. :)

Haraki...I really do need Coro to stay alive...you'll see why after this ordeal is over lol.

All right, I'll do my best to keep Coro alive. Although I know the two Shentavos I'm rooting for to live ...

I know... I have some tough desisions to make. The one about Rave is already decided, but shall be kept confidential.

Hey Rave ... Possible to TG me your plans, since it appears that Coro will be playing a major part in this, and he can actually see the future, although he doesn't let on, and depending on what he sees happening he'll react differently.

for some reason I can't tG you...do you have IM?

If it says there's a security error, try again. That happens if you're logged in with more than one nation (Are you?).

What's it tell you when you try?

No...i'm not. When I click on "haraki" then veiw nation....I'm not logged in anymore, so I can't send a tg.

You have to go to NS, log in, go to the world and then search for Haraki unless you have auto-login enabled, then.

wait i tg'd you..i'm just stupid I gues...and very tired lol.

K. Thanks a lot. Also, once you decide who'll live and who'll die, the same, because Coro'll be able to tell who'll live and who won't, and, again, will react differently.

it's so hard to decide...I have one that is definate that will be surviving...and two to choose from on who the other one will be....sooo hard...maybe i'll have three...not sure.

Well, you could TG me those three names, as Coro can't tell exactly precise future. Just those three names would be enough.

just did.

Yeah, I saw. And I'm pleased with what Isee, and yet also displeased.

Coro will not be happy ...

Alright...alright....alright....I'll keep the person so Coro won't kill me

Yaaaayyy! Although I've had an idea about that. I'll TG it to you.

alright...new stats...

four will live.....

five will die....

and two more will die (that are on the council, yet not by blood relation)

Alright.....Slowely starting to reconsider it only to have three remaining...... :?


any way..poor excuse for a bump.

Mephisto watched from a distance, warily. So, Azrael. This is the path you have chosen to walk. I am still the stronger. There is no Seraphim Micheal to distract me this time.

OOC: What am I meant to do?

ooc: Eep...it's not beginning yet...I have to finish up all of my other threads and wait till Underaloz get's back...this thread is for ooc comments...and i'll start a new one for the rp.

OOC: By the way, add me to that list. And I think Arithon should participate as the evil demonic horde.

And why are you leaving NS?

ooc: there are no hords....just basically Rave against Mephistop and with semi interconnected plots......

OOC: I'm not getting answered. Why am I not surprised?

Very well, I will wait in suspense. But please, tg me! You said you needed to, so do so!

OOC: I'm pretty sure Rave will be among the victims. And Alexiel has to survive, because she's new and has to be given a chance for character development.

Of course, this is assuming that Underaloz ever gets back. He's sure taking his time.

HMmMmMmMmMMMMmmmm are you sure about that? Alot of my characters who DON"T have any character developement may perish, as well as those whom have a LOT of developement lol. :lol:

(OOC: Can't take this tension any longer! Tell Underaloz that he is to blame for this 'cause he doesn't get internet at home. *opens window and jumps out*

:shock: *saves Earth II* I have wings...remember? (check on need characters thread)

HMmMmMmMmMMMMmmmm are you sure about that? Alot of my characters who DON"T have any character developement may perish, as well as those whom have a LOT of developement lol. :lol:

I didn't predict that Alexiel will survive, only said that I think she should. Okay, or maybe I'm just feeling for Coro :wink: .

As for Rave, I was already sure she would die before I saw the "The New Girl" thread.

I'm not sure if she really 'survived' "The End?"

meep....oh..i have plans for her...

that's why I placed ' ' around the survived :D

eep right.... common Vaughn has to get back soon...he's missed a lot, but all of it can't continue without him.

I'm sure what he missed can be comprehended so he knows what's going on.
*wishes Underaloz would finally return*
damn, he'll have to make a lot of RP's when he is back :D

lol....here's the agenda:

1. What's mine is yourse

2. Hopefully some transition rp...where it's just us.

3. The end?

4. The new girl (will be over by then, but he has to read it to know what's going on...don't want him to think I'm going to leave him like that...we'll be together in the end...if love really can conquer all) WHAT?! I'm a girl...leave me alone...I like happy endings....

5. Restoration of Leadership.

2. Hopefully some transition rp...where it's just us.




Hmmm...*smiles*

5. Restoration of Leadership.

This says all I think :D

Ahhh.....that title is decieving :twisted:

maybe a good idea from a transition between a new girl and the end? would be "Kissed by a rose on the grave" most appropriate title, and most enjoyable song.

lol....here's the agenda:

1. What's mine is yourse

2. Hopefully some transition rp...where it's just us.

3. The end?

4. The new girl (will be over by then, but he has to read it to know what's going on...don't want him to think I'm going to leave him like that...we'll be together in the end...if love really can conquer all) WHAT?! I'm a girl...leave me alone...I like happy endings....

5. Restoration of Leadership.

Thank you! I might be able to figure out what is going on now lol!

hah ha hah.....

1. Will confuse you kain

2. not created yet...

3. IS this thread...not started yet./

4. Will confuse you kain..don't read it lol.

5.not created yet..


for you kain, read "this is a tale of love"

Done, just waiting....currently writing my next change for Kain. So many ideas, just writing the damn thing lol!

When do you expect Underaloz will return then? He’s been away at least 3 or 4 months…

Either way I get the impression it’s not going to be much of an event for James… as you may be able to tell he doesn’t really buy into the whole celestial thing, he’s the kind of person who would take a look at a daemon and tell his army to shoot it till it stops twitching.

Interesting point… Iuthian’s are naturally inept a magic, it takes them a lot longer to learn the basics and get a grasp of it all, however, in return they’re inept because they are resistant to it, usually this only counts for mental effects… but in some cases it’s a little better if the Iuthian in question loathes magic (I’ve got no current character like that though…)

It's fine if you don't want to...i understand. The ones who vitally are in great need to be there are Joshua, Vaughn, Coro, and Eclipse.

It's not that he doesn't want to be there... it's more that he's a simple man and he has simple answers to problems. Being simple isn't the same as being dumb however.

I was simply stating that he isn't going to actually be able to do much... if he had it his way he would have a large number of M.I in the area (power armoured men, mod approved!). But they would die becuase only supernaturals have any effect as technology is ignored.

Also he isn't going to understand most of the things that are going on... he'll definately go to the wedding... but if god herself came down he would discard it as something else. Imagination isn't one of his strong points.

*is mega confused*

*bangs head on desk**gets Coke can lodged in forehead*

Awww man! That's the fifth one this week!

Just wondering if I could get in......the only characters that I have used with you are Jenna and Dom. Dom is indesposed at the moment, but Jenna would like in......I don't care if she would die really.

I thought rave was being held prisoner?

Yeah but we've got tons of stuff RPed from after that...

Just hope things work out alright becuase I am techniqually the one who got her captured by saying "why not" to WV and letting him do it... OOC of course, James isn't that kind of guy.

Just wondering if I could get in......the only characters that I have used with you are Jenna and Dom. Dom is indesposed at the moment, but Jenna would like in......I don't care if she would die really.

Rave: I'll make you a deal. IF you send more chocolate chip cookies, you can send whomever. :lol:

Consider the cookies sent.

Alright. :D (I wouldn't have refused you, but figured I could get more cookies, we were running low :o )

OOC: Insert the usual sarcastic, bitter comment of one who has lost all energy and ability and now wanders the forums, inserting the usual sarcastic, bitter comments of one who has lost all energy and ability and now wanders the forums...

You get the idea.