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World Superpower created (1000% open)

Jamum
24-03-2005, 23:31
This is the world superpower alliance this is basically for nation's who can't compete with older nation’s by themselves this has been created to combine military, scientific and economic strengths of all nation's creating a true world power this is the only way that nations can compete on a world stage with the giant's of the world who will always force there ideal’s on us.


there are no requirement’s to join this alliance but you must share everything as that is the only way for us to thrive there will be separate member’s who will control different part’s of the alliance there will be:

RP Generals these will fight our conflicts but there will be rank’s that will specify there ability as show in this list


1# army officer control’s 8 infantry divisions (in training)

2# world superpower alliance officer 5 mechanized/tank divisions (in training)

3# General shares command with 3 other general’s usually splits the forces (RP but not by self cannot use WMD)

4# army officer trainer (this is optional but is a great way to gain support for a promotion)

5# General 3 star able to RP by self but cannot use WMD

6# General 5 star can use WMD with permission can also use the newest technology available

7# world superpower alliance General can RP against a whole region a member of the military council

Military council: has power to declare war on any nation or region control’s military purchasing


Diplomat responsible for treaty’s (has to have good persuasion and will go through test to prove there ability) will be a member of diplomat council

diplomat council: decides what deal’s to sign can declare war with military support


Scientist responsible for the alliances technological growth (member of science council) there will be a military research and peaceful research branch

science council: controls research funding


Trader controls 1 of the alliances businesses member of (trade council)

trade council: control’s all the alliances business given funds to purchase rival companies and production rights is also responsible for alliances imports and exports


Main council: assembly of branch leaders has complete control over all over councils with a majority vote

Remember you can’t be a power without this alliance
Jamum
24-03-2005, 23:35
ooc:well I am in! remember this is mainly MT but im looking for player's to build the alliance in all other techs
Jamum
24-03-2005, 23:44
ooc:c'mon peaple this is great
Soviet leaders
24-03-2005, 23:44
I will be you guys storefront If you accept you will get a 50% off on my storefront. Just for members in your Alliance.
The weapones mad by us are in the Future tech thing if you want blaster we are going to start making modern tech guns soon ok



I don't want to be in it
Soviet leaders
24-03-2005, 23:49
But I would love to help you with military tech we make the weapones and you will get 50% off on the storefront just think...

:mp5: :sniper: :gundge: :gundge: :gundge: :mp5: :mp5:

and we do love to accept any request for weapones
Jamum
24-03-2005, 23:51
I will be you guys storefront If you accept you will get a 50% off on my storefront. Just for members in your Alliance.
The weapones mad by us are in the Future tech thing if you want blaster we are going to start making modern tech guns soon ok



I don't want to be in it

deal :fluffle:
Jamum
24-03-2005, 23:52
But I would love to help you with military tech we make the weapones and you will get 50% off on the storefront just think...

:mp5: :sniper: :gundge: :gundge: :gundge: :mp5: :mp5:

and we do love to accept any request for weapones

sold tell a friend :)
Soviet leaders
24-03-2005, 23:52
cool Telegram me when you have request for new stuff like a tank or something.
Soviet leaders
24-03-2005, 23:54
what is the name of the alliance?
Jamum
24-03-2005, 23:56
what is the name of the alliance?
world superpower alliance
Jamum
24-03-2005, 23:59
you can also join it for a trail period just to see if you like it (which you will)
Soviet leaders
24-03-2005, 23:59
sure I will try it I am not MT I am FT
cool you can buy from the storefront it has the deal going so I hope you get lots of members
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:01
sure post the storefront address here (advertising)
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:02
wouldn't happen to have any recruiting ideas would you?
Soviet leaders
25-03-2005, 00:05
Here is the storefront
http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread...315#post8421315

It is on my signature at the buttom of it were it says "Here is our storefront"
Huntaer
25-03-2005, 00:06
If you are looking for other FT stuff, you can check out my store fronts (found in signature).
Soviet leaders
25-03-2005, 00:07
Maybe if you said World Superpower Alliance Join NOW!! right at the begining of the thread if you can in bold print were you say what the Alliance is about
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:12
If you are looking for other FT stuff, you can check out my store fronts (found in signature).

I don't want this to turn into a advertising hub so go away (unless you have business with the alliance)
Soviet leaders
25-03-2005, 00:18
I am here to help the Alliance with getting a place to get military stuff and research.
Yes Foundation INC. is going to have more traffic coming to it and this Alliance is Mordern tech and my storefront has modern tech
Skibereen
25-03-2005, 00:22
OOC: Recruiting Tip:
Roleplay--this thread is Out of Character, so no one is seeing any skills be displayed on your part.
I myself have no desire to join an alliance--the president of my RP'd nation however might have different ideas.
Have a little more depth.
Soviet leaders
25-03-2005, 00:23
But I almost cry when I see Alliances not make it and I am in this to help serve the needs of a Alliance that has a vary new Idea of runing itself
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:24
OOC: Recruiting Tip:
Roleplay--this thread is Out of Character, so no one is seeing any skills be displayed on your part.
I myself have no desire to join an alliance--the president of my RP'd nation however might have different ideas.
Have a little more depth.

thank you for replying and giving advice (I was in a rush to get into the Euro main online time and as you can see failed :( ) oh and tell a friend
Omg I Have Aids
25-03-2005, 00:26
Or you could just go over to nukezone.com and make a clan that actually has a miltary and nukes hell that is what nz is about war. But if your looking for some weapons i can make a deal with you below is a list of all weapons, vehicles, wmd, missles, satilites, and ammo.

Weapons

Flame thrower-$800 M6-$800 m-16/gl-$800 Krauser aratech sniper rife-$1000 Bazooka-$1200 pistol-$670

Vehicles

Mlrv Warthog-$12,000 Scorpion tank-$20,000 Pelican Dropship-$100,000 Longsword Interceptor-$98,000

Wmd

Icbm-$12,000,000

satilites

Spy-$10,000,000 Nuke-$890,000,000 Lazer-$98,000,000 Radar-$free

Ammo-$89,000,000,000
*special*

G36-$10,000,000 Ravager-$1,000,000,000 land Warrior system-$999,999,999
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:27
But I almost cry when I see Alliances not make it and I am in this to help serve the needs of a Alliance that has a vary new Idea of runing itself

thank you for helping your officially considered an ally (I got the idea seeing all those nations being terrified of big bully's)
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:29
Or you could just go over to nukezone.com and make a clan that actually has a miltary and nukes hell that is what nz is about war. But if your looking for some weapons i can make a deal with you below is a list of all weapons, vehicles, wmd, missles, satilites, and ammo.

Weapons

Flame thrower-$800 M6-$800 m-16/gl-$800 Krauser aratech sniper rife-$1000 Bazooka-$1200 pistol-$670

Vehicles

Mlrv Warthog-$12,000 Scorpion tank-$20,000 Pelican Dropship-$100,000 Longsword Interceptor-$98,000

Wmd

Icbm-$12,000,000

satilites

Spy-$10,000,000 Nuke-$890,000,000 Lazer-$98,000,000 Radar-$free

Ammo-$89,000,000,000
*special*

G36-$10,000,000 Ravager-$1,000,000,000 land Warrior system-$999,999,999


thank you for your support I will considor your offer (don't have the time right now)
Soviet leaders
25-03-2005, 00:30
OOC:ok

IC: "We have a Alliance that we a giving support to." the CEO of Foundation INC. said with pride. the eamperor said "Oh that is why this nation ask us if we wanted to join." then the screen turned off. The emperor said "computer tell the Alliance that we will be glad to join." the computer said "tell sent"
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:33
Jamum command receiving the message sent back a message instantly reading entry accepted
Huntaer
25-03-2005, 00:36
The only reason why I'm interested in this alliance is for my puppet nation:
Huntarian Alliances.

The puppet deals with a rebellion. I'm just using my main nation. So the origonal question would be:

Could Huntarian Alliances join this alliance?
Soviet Sovereignty
25-03-2005, 00:36
The Sovereignty and it's Independant Republics applaud the nations of the said Alliance and is here to help in any requested way.
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:39
ooc:you can join any one of the branches or all of them :)
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:44
The only reason why I'm interested in this alliance is for my puppet nation:
Huntarian Alliances.

The puppet deals with a rebellion. I'm just using my main nation. So the origonal question would be:

Could Huntarian Alliances join this alliance?


ooc: yes just don't use it to spy on us and please post your request in RP
Homieville
25-03-2005, 00:46
I will be in an alliance with you my friend I added you to my NS dossier and my Buddy list did you Jamum
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:48
I will be in an alliance with you my friend I added you to my NS dossier and my Buddy list did you Jamum

ok 1 last step just send a message to join in RP...buddy :)
Huntaer
25-03-2005, 00:52
ooc: yes just don't use it to spy on us and please post your request in RP

No problem on the spying part. Huntarian Alliances is my Good-side nation
and fights Huntaer for freedom of their people. So, I don't think there will be any spying from them. They need help anyways. And speaking of RPing... *Switches to Puppet nation*
Jamum
25-03-2005, 00:58
No problem on the spying part. Huntarian Alliances is my Good-side nation
and fights Huntaer for freedom of their people. So, I don't think there will be any spying from them. They need help anyways. And speaking of RPing... *Switches to Puppet nation*


we always admire nations willing to stand and fight for what they believe in
Huntarian Alliances
25-03-2005, 01:02
OOC: I read your post in my "Extending it's Army Further" thread. I'd honestly prefer it if you have my "Puppet Nation" as the official member as it is they need help in their resistance.


A cloaked man in brown and grey robes aproaches the room, his Sabersword (OOC: AKA: Lightsaber) placed upon his hilt. This man is a Malkir(OOC: my Jedi faction). As one of the Generals of the evergoing resistance against Huntaer he has searched high and low for a alliance.

"Greetings fellow people. On behalf of Huntarian Alliances, we wish to request to join this alliance."
Jamum
25-03-2005, 01:08
OOC: I read your post in my "Extending it's Army Further" thread. I'd honestly prefer it if you have my "Puppet Nation" as the official member as it is they need help in their resistance.


A cloaked man in brown and grey robes aproaches the room, his Sabersword (OOC: AKA: Lightsaber) placed upon his hilt. This man is a Malkir(OOC: my Jedi faction). As one of the Generals of the evergoing resistance against Huntaer he has searched high and low for a alliance.

"Greetings fellow people. On behalf of Huntarian Alliances, we wish to request to join this alliance."

A voice from the shadow's call's out "you are accepted"
Jamum
25-03-2005, 01:24
Bright
Up
Bones
Please join us :)
The Fedral Union
25-03-2005, 01:28
sure we'll join..
Jamum
25-03-2005, 01:55
entry accepted
Hogsweat
25-03-2005, 02:05
you can put your puppet's in also making us very very powerful which also gives us an advantage over the whole world


GODMODDER ALLIANCE: Ignored.
The Scandinvans
25-03-2005, 03:55
I will join.
Homieville
25-03-2005, 04:20
I will join too
Homieville
25-03-2005, 04:21
I will join too

Nevermind I already joined
Relative Liberty
25-03-2005, 15:43
Do you mind a FT nation? If not, I will join.
Jamum
25-03-2005, 16:11
GODMODDER ALLIANCE: Ignored.

don't be a loser how can you really prove there puppet's........you could be a puppet for all I know :mad:
Jamum
25-03-2005, 16:12
Do you mind a FT nation? If not, I will join.


message from Jamum command "entry accepted"
Jamum
25-03-2005, 16:13
I will join.

message from Jamum command "entry accepted"
Ankhmet
25-03-2005, 16:15
don't be a loser how can you really prove there puppet's........you could be a puppet for all I know :mad:


Ahem:

you can put your puppet's in also making us very very powerful which also gives us an advantage over the whole world
Jamum
25-03-2005, 16:16
message from super power alliance command

Our great alliance is already challenging the large nations we are constantly growing stronger I ask you join us think of what we could achieve
Jamum
25-03-2005, 16:17
Ahem:


yes but can you prove that there puppet's
Ankhmet
25-03-2005, 16:28
Who is it that this 'powerful alliance' is challenging? Give me examples.


If I see real examples I will take back my evil thoughts and dance naked for a crowd of sex offenders.
Groundfield
25-03-2005, 16:28
may the people’s of Groundfield please join this great alliance
Ankhmet
25-03-2005, 16:29
may the people’s of Groundfield please join this great alliance


If you enter this alliance you ARE in danger. People don't seem to like the upstart, bragging nation of Jamum.
Jamum
25-03-2005, 16:31
If you enter this alliance you ARE in danger. People don't seem to like the upstart, bragging nation of Jamum.

ooc:WTF I don't even no you
Jamum
25-03-2005, 16:35
may the people’s of Groundfield please join this great alliance

entry accepted
Hypotheticalia
25-03-2005, 16:43
may the awesome nation of Hypotheticalia please join your alliance
Hypotheticalia
25-03-2005, 16:43
If you enter this alliance you ARE in danger. People don't seem to like the upstart, bragging nation of Jamum.

always picking on the little guy
Bulgers
25-03-2005, 16:49
I wish to join this alliance I believe it is the only way we can compete in the world
Spamosaurus Rex
25-03-2005, 16:52
I like the way this alliance is working but why should I join?
Jamum
25-03-2005, 16:55
I like the way this alliance is working but why should I join?

well you get a 50% discount here http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread...315#post8421315 and we share tech research


all request's exepted
Spamosaurus Rex
25-03-2005, 16:56
very well I will join in
Jamum
25-03-2005, 16:57
very well I will join in

you may join
Jamum
25-03-2005, 23:10
Bump!
Jamum
26-03-2005, 16:53
Bump
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 18:08
always picking on the little guy

Always punching above your weight.WAY above your weight. It's like a small snail with asthma attempting to attack a twenty foot tall boxer made entirely of salt.
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 18:13
This alliance isn't very well thought out. I have a few suggestions to reduce the amount of laughs you get from the more experienced nations:

1)Run the first post through a grammar and spell check.

2)Perhaps wait a bit longer before you start an alliance, to give yourself time to build up a better reputation in the world.

3)Introduce some requirements for joining. If you do, you'll get (sorry for the use of this particular word) 'better' nations joining up, which would encourage people to get better, so they too can join.

4)Stop bragging. Your combined population doesn't even reach one billion. Saying you have an advantage over the whole world is a quick and easy road to 'asskicked avenue', and a way of losing respect.

5)Get rid of any puppets that you know of who are in the alliance. Using puppets to bulk up is lame, don't do it kids.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 21:00
go away! for days you have stood in the way of this alliance why? and we reserve the right to defend ourselves from your aggression
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 21:01
go away! for days you have stood in the way of this alliance why? and we reserve the right to defend ourselves from your aggression

What agression? I have pointed out ways for you NOT to get laughed at, and YOU are the one being agressive.

And looking at your combined population I would stomp you. And I have allies of a similar size. You have allies of a very small size.

I have stood in the way of this alliance because it is simply a way for some upstart to jump his way up to a position of power the rest of us work our way up to, and you aren't even going to be very powerful, yet you brag as if you had control of the universe or something. Just watch yourself, you aren't making any friends by bragging. Except for small nations who think they can get some power by joining. Which they can't.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 21:12
What agression? I have pointed out ways for you NOT to get laughed at, and YOU are the one being agressive.

And looking at your combined population I would stomp you. And I have allies of a similar size. You have allies of a very small size.

I have stood in the way of this alliance because it is simply a way for some upstart to jump his way up to a position of power the rest of us work our way up to, and you aren't even going to be very powerful, yet you brag as if you had control of the universe or something. Just watch yourself, you aren't making any friends by bragging. Except for small nations who think they can get some power by joining. Which they can't.

hey! we got Roman Republic and Bonstock joining so I wouldn't call us small (I hate using peaple for fear but I have to) and also work your way up what work did you do I suppose it must be hard clicking a mouse
The Island of Rose
26-03-2005, 21:12
I agree with Ankhmet here. You guys seem like idiots and jackasses, sorry to say.

Not that you are, I'm sure you're intelligent people in real life. But in NS you're not giving out a good image.
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 21:16
This is the world superpower alliance. This is basically for nations who can't compete with older nations by themselves. This has been created to combine the military, scientific and economic strengths of all member nations creating a true world power. This is the only way that nations can compete on a world stage with the giants of the world, who will always force their ideals on us.


There are no requirements to join this alliance, but you must share everything, as that is the only way for us to thrive. There will be separate members who will control different parts of the alliance. There will be:

RP Generals: These will fight our conflicts, but there will be ranks which will specify their authority, as shown in this list.


#1 Army Officer: Controls 8 infantry divisions (in training).

#2 World Superpower Alliance officer: 5 mechanized/tank divisions (in training).

#3 General: Shares command with 3 other generals. Usually splits the forces (RP but not by self. Cannot use WMD).

#4 Army Officer Trainer: (this is optional, but is a great way to gain support for a promotion)

#5 General 3 star: Able to RP by self, but cannot use WMD.

#6 General 5 star: Can use WMD with permission. Can also use the newest technology available.

#7 World Superpower Alliance General: Can RP against a whole region a member of the military council.

Military Council: Has power to declare war on any nation or region. Controls military purchasing.


Diplomat: Responsible for treaties. (has to have good persuasion and will go through test to prove there ability) Will be a member of diplomatic council.

Diplomatic Council: Decides what deals to sign, can declare war (with military support).


Scientist: Responsible for the alliances technological growth. (member of science council) There will be military research and peaceful research branches.

Science Council: Controls research funding.


Trader: Controls 1 member of the Trade Council.

Trade Council: Controls all alliance funds, has authority to purchase companies and production rights.

Main Council: Assembly of branch leaders. Has complete control over all over councils, with a majority vote.

Remember: you can’t be a power without this alliance.
-------------------------------------------------------
Here, just copy and paste this into the first post.
The Island of Rose
26-03-2005, 21:17
hey! we got Roman Republic and Bonstock joining so I wouldn't call us small (I hate using peaple for fear but I have to) and also work your way up what work did you do I suppose it must be hard clicking a mouse

Roman Republic isn't that powerful. But Bonstock is another story. Either way, eh.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 21:19
there is nothing wrong with this allience im just trying to improve the RP by adding power to player's who have worked hard for month's but are still traped by the fact you found this site first
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 21:20
there is nothing wrong with this allience im just trying to improve the RP by adding power to player's who have worked hard for month's but are still traped by the fact you found this site first

Just copy and paste the page I did, at least!
Jamum
26-03-2005, 21:20
and also we won't be sending noobs with guns out as you can see by the rank's they are trained to fight in RP
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 21:21
and also we won't be sending noobs with guns out as you can see by the rank's they are trained to fight in RP

I would like to point out that you cannot use fear. You have TWO nations who aren't tiny. That doesn't exactly terrify me.

Again, please copy and paste the corrections I made, it could attract more nations to have a properly spelled and punctuated introduction.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 21:22
your point
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 21:23
your point

You said you hate to use fear. You can't. Your alliance is tiny, even with Bonstock.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 21:24
at least were trying
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 21:25
at least were trying

I applaud your bravery, you are trying. And a decent attempt it is, but please wait a while and build up some respect before you charge off arrogantly proclaiming to be leader of the best alliance there is.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 21:30
I could wait but to be honest I won't this idea is a good one and will get rid of the noobs
Jamum
26-03-2005, 21:42
we already number 1755.389 billion! registered citizens shall we make it 2000 billion!
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 21:43
I could wait but to be honest I won't this idea is a good one and will get rid of the noobs


No!It attracts the noobs!A completely open alliance where everything including military power is shared. That isn't going to attract noobs, honest! Every noob who wants a little chunk of somebody else is going to join. Then, everyone else is going to stomp it. You will have many, tiny nations. But I bet no more than two large nations will join.


List every nation please. I want to count.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 21:51
Soviet leaders
Soviet Sovereignty
Homieville
Huntarian Alliances
The Fedral Union
The Scandinvans
Relative Liberty
Groundfield
Hypotheticalia
Bulgers
Spamosaurus Rex
Bonstock
Roman Republic
and me Jamum
Jamum
26-03-2005, 21:52
No!It attracts the noobs!A completely open alliance where everything including military power is shared. That isn't going to attract noobs, honest! Every noob who wants a little chunk of somebody else is going to join. Then, everyone else is going to stomp it. You will have many, tiny nations. But I bet no more than two large nations will join.


List every nation please. I want to count.

the ideas to attract noobs here they can ask questions have a few practice RP's and learn not to be so godmod in a safeplace where knowone will poke fun for it
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 22:01
the ideas to attract noobs here they can ask questions have a few practice RP's and learn not to be so godmod in a safeplace where knowone will poke fun for it

If you gather together noobs, you will get noobs and nothing else. Your idea is noble, but flawed. Look at Sephrioth. He was a complete god-moder, and he was given guidance by the best. But he reverted again. It just doesn't work really. And your alliance will get a reputation for being the home of one-line-posts, and god-moding, just like the alliances sephrioth favoured.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 22:03
If you gather together noobs, you will get noobs and nothing else. Your idea is noble, but flawed. Look at Sephrioth. He was a complete god-moder, and he was given guidance by the best. But he reverted again. It just doesn't work really. And your alliance will get a reputation for being the home of one-line-posts, and god-moding, just like the alliances sephrioth favoured.

so all noobs are doomed wasnt you a noob once?
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 22:05
so all noobs are doomed wasnt you a noob once?

But I could spell.

No. I wasn't saying that. I was saying you don't have much of a chance. A whelk's chance in a supernova. Perhaps we could discuss these things at the conference?
Jamum
26-03-2005, 22:08
unless Microsoft word has no grammar and spelling I think my punctuation is right
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 22:09
unless Microsoft word has no grammar and spelling I think my punctuation is right

That should say:

'Unless Microsoft word has no grammar and spelling, I think my punctuation is right.'

Word doesn't check grammar.

P'//n3d.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 22:14
yes it does that’s what the green underline is
Roman Republic
26-03-2005, 22:16
I'll join your alliance.
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 22:16
yes it does that’s what the green underline is

But you seem to be ignoring the green line.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 22:18
I'll join your alliance.
ooc:you already did remember the tele
ic:request accepted
Roman Republic
26-03-2005, 22:23
ooc:you already did remember the tele
ic:request accepted

Thanks
Jamum
26-03-2005, 22:25
Roman I need your help gate crash the world super power confernece
Roman Republic
26-03-2005, 22:26
Roman I need your help gate crash the world super power confernece

You mean to destroy the Conference or to be part of it.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 22:27
be part of it
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 22:34
You mean to destroy the Conference or to be part of it.

You are NOT invited.
Jamum
26-03-2005, 22:37
yes he is!
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 22:41
yes he is!

But you do not have the power of INVITE!

We both have a 'team'. Both are equal in numbers, with a small group of neutrals. Accept it!
Jamum
26-03-2005, 22:41
your conference is fixed and you know it
Ankhmet
26-03-2005, 22:52
your conference is fixed and you know it

How is it fixed?Because we both have equal teams?Are you so lacking in confidence in your debating ability that you need an advantage?
Jamum
26-03-2005, 22:59
How is it fixed?Because we both have equal teams?Are you so lacking in confidence in your debating ability that you need an advantage?
from what I hear my side is not well respected which seems a big coincidense
Hogsweat
27-03-2005, 13:53
Jamum, do you know the difference between OOC and IC? You stated OOC [out of character] that you accept puppets, therefore everyone already knows OOC and will refuse to fight with you.. And Bonstock and Roman Republic are noobs anyway.
Ankhmet
27-03-2005, 15:19
from what I hear my side is not well respected which seems a big coincidense

Nobody in your alliance is well respected!
Praetonia
27-03-2005, 16:00
OOC: SOme friendly advise for this alliance and its members:

1) Don't call yourself the "World Superpower Alliance". It's bound to attract people attacking you and not to put too fine a point on it... you aren't superpowers. None of you. You can't back up your claims, so don't make them.

2) Encourage good RP. Don't flame or argue OOC. If someone says something you don't like them politely ask them to leave.

3) Spell check / proof read your posts. Even a poor RP written in gramatically correct English and spelt more or less correctly will get you some respect.

4) Understand the difference between IC and OOC. Just because you're at war with someone's nation IC doesn't mean you have to flame their player or say things like "OOC: You're going down" or "OOC: You stand no chance ;) :sniper: :sniper: :mp5: :mp5: ". Roman Republic does this a lot and all it does is start flame wars for no real reason.

5) Don't use smilies ever IC and only where absolutely appropriate OOC. Never use these ones: :mp5: :sniper: :gundge: They're typical n00b fodder.

6) Write long, in-depth posts. Instead of just saying "I want to join the Super Power Alliance" post two or three of your charcters discussing the pros and cons and then making a decision. Even an Official Statement post written to be about a paragraph long is much better than a one line post (again, typical n00b fodder).

Finally, some examples of good RPs:

http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=349696
http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=393450
http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=380612

And some bad RPs:

http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=385398 (play close attention to Hataria and Roman Republic in this one)
http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=390397
Relative Liberty
27-03-2005, 17:24
Jamum, listen to them. That is constructive criticism and you haven't even replied.
Groundfield
27-03-2005, 18:27
ooc: you cant blame Jamum for not posting the right grammar he says his spell check is rubbish I have Microsoft works and it's spell check is terrible

oh and it is a good idea to point out errors in tele because now he has to start this again due to the fact that this looks a mess now
Groundfield
27-03-2005, 18:33
The "super power" means that we aim to actually be a superpower at least in this alliance which is why we share technology and economic strength
Praetonia
27-03-2005, 18:40
Groundfield: Your post doesn't even have capital letters and full stops. I refuse to believe that you don't understand capital letters and full stops (I mean you might not... who knows) but really it doesnt take all that much effort. MS word puts them in automatically... and I've never seen any problems with the MS spellchecker.

On the superpower point... an alliance full of 2005 nations with the occassional 2003 nation tacked on (I haven't seen Bonstock RP for a while... maybe that's just me) doesn't make a superpower. An alliance full of 2003 and 2004 nations with the occassional 2005 nation tacked on might. Really, all the superpower title will do is cause resentment and (as you've already seen) get people to attack you.
Groundfield
27-03-2005, 18:59
ooc:you have to understand me and Jamum are both in the "special set" in English you cant expect us to write at a good level

and the super power thing that is supposed to mean like landing on the moon or curing cancer we only include military because it seems to be the pass time here and will get member's and no we haven’t really been attacked only one person really has a problem with us and if you read his message board he plans to control membership which leads us to struggle to defend ourselves

if you read my plea in the aid thread you will see how peaceful we are

Bonstock is currently training RR and Jamum in a war game that is why you haven’t seen them
Groundfield
27-03-2005, 19:24
ooc:this is still open to applications and would like to encourage player's to join us even for a trail period
Jamum
27-03-2005, 19:34
ooc:you have to understand me and Jamum are both in the "special set" in English you cant expect us to write at a good level

and the super power thing that is supposed to mean like landing on the moon or curing cancer we only include military because it seems to be the pass time here and will get member's and no we haven’t really been attacked only one person really has a problem with us and if you read his message board he plans to control membership which leads us to struggle to defend ourselves

if you read my plea in the aid thread you will see how peaceful we are

Bonstock is currently training RR and Jamum in a war game that is why you haven’t seen them

ooc:great job now I can be called idiot even more
The Merchant Guilds
27-03-2005, 19:45
IC:

We laugh at this collection of infidels, they shall be obviously cleansed by God's almighty wrath when the time of judgement comes or by our glorious armies. We will consider you to be potential acquisitions to our Empire.

-A relatively low ranking random Guild Bureaucrat, after his wife had been burned at the stake for witchcraft


OOC:

Btw, that wasn't a statement of I am going to kick you, it's more IC speaking... :D

Right, I am with Ankhmet (first time I have agreed with you I think) and Prae on this one, don't know why Hoggy ignored it but probably because we have these alliances before:

Now you are attracting players who are either N00bish or contraversial (RR and Bonstock), seriously go away and draw up a decent alliance charter, make some forums etc. If you want a good alliance charter go look at the IADF (as much as I am going to exterminate them, they do have an excellent presentation :P) as an exercise (do a forum search for IADF and you'll find their reccy thread).

Please don't try to punch above your weight, you don't want to annoy some of the powers on here, you're entire alliance couldn't stop some of them. Let alone the superpower alliances...

Also, I'd like to point out your on a doomed legacy, the only alliance I know of that has any credability with smaller players is IADF and thats because they are protected by people like The Macabee's, Safehaven2 etc (Credonia doesn't count), who are former RWC members and in Mac's case a founder.

Also, take Prae's advice and go do some first time military and character RP's (stating that this is the case in the OOC blurb or the title), then even ask one or two well respected RPers (I am sure Prae and others would be happy to help) to point out tips and hints to the people taking part.

Please please, also read the stickies as well, post maturely IC/OOC and you will be fine.
Jamum
27-03-2005, 19:52
ooc:I suppose I will have to start again since this thread is now totally ruined but you really can't blame me not one person has offered any committed help with this I just tried something different which like it or not is good a idea to make the game more competitive
Praetonia
27-03-2005, 19:59
OOC: If you want you can TG me the post and I'll fix the grammar for you.
Jamum
27-03-2005, 20:06
OOC: If you want you can TG me the post and I'll fix the grammar for you.

ooc:thx :fluffle: its about time you start the conference isn’t it
Praetonia
27-03-2005, 20:26
Oh yes I forgot about that.
Soviet leaders
27-03-2005, 20:40
Offical Statement from Soviet Leaders


Sent to Jamum and everyone in the thread
Soviet Leaders is leaving this Alliance. Because of the following reasons first
We see that this Alliance has no checks or balances and is in need of some revising. We also see that this will become a war like Alliance and that new nations will get be hide a nuclear weapon but we will help this Alliance through the tough road ahead. We hope that the Conference will help this alliance get on the right track. We think that the Alliance should have some sort of governing body filled with nations that are not war like and have so sort of respect also that the name of the Alliance should be changed to something less treating to other nations. We wish to see no war come out of this we will still give the Alliance the discount at our store.

Sincerely
Emperor Alexander,Romakov
Minster of foreign Affairs:Jove, Ralkov


OOC: I hope this is right
Praetonia
27-03-2005, 20:49
OOC: http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=408045
Ankhmet
27-03-2005, 21:43
ooc:great job now I can be called idiot even more

Nobody would do that. It just makes a good excuse.
Jamum
27-03-2005, 21:44
jion the confernce!
Shazbotdom
30-03-2005, 00:25
IC:
To: Glorious Leader of the Nation of Jamum
From: Emporer Shaz Bot

After much debate between the Emporer and the Parliment, it has been decided that The Holy Empire of Shazbotdom will indeed Join this alliance. Although we wish to be a member and not part of any special task force. The Holy Empire is currently a part of the United Nations and has Embasies in a few other nations. Information about the Holy Empire is as follows:

Nations Name: The Holy Empire of Shazbotdom
National Leader: Mr. Shaz Bot, Emporer
Population: 1,036,000,000
UN Catagory: Father Knows Best State
Civil Rights: Below Average
Economy: Thriving
Political Freedoms: Few
Location: Wildcat Country
Government Priority: Law And Order
Major Industry: Trout Farming



OOC: National Information is acurate as of March 29, 2005 at 5:25pm Central US Standard Time.

Also, if message boards are needed, i can set a free phpBB board up for the use of the alliance.
Jamum
30-03-2005, 00:40
IC:
To: Glorious Leader of the Nation of Jamum
From: Emporer Shaz Bot

After much debate between the Emporer and the Parliment, it has been decided that The Holy Empire of Shazbotdom will indeed Join this alliance. Although we wish to be a member and not part of any special task force. The Holy Empire is currently a part of the United Nations and has Embasies in a few other nations. Information about the Holy Empire is as follows:

Nations Name: The Holy Empire of Shazbotdom
National Leader: Mr. Shaz Bot, Emporer
Population: 1,036,000,000
UN Catagory: Father Knows Best State
Civil Rights: Below Average
Economy: Thriving
Political Freedoms: Few
Location: Wildcat Country
Government Priority: Law And Order
Major Industry: Trout Farming



OOC: National Information is acurate as of March 29, 2005 at 5:25pm Central US Standard Time.

Also, if message boards are needed, i can set a free phpBB board up for the use of the alliance.


Message from the Empire of Jamum

you may join but we are currently switching the name of the allience and the charter so look out for the crocodile allience which should be running by tomorrow (rl time)
Random Kingdom
30-03-2005, 01:18
OOC: What the heck is this about? If I could understand the ranks I might join. Perhaps this alliance could become great. We must show these nonbelievers that just because this is an alliance open to anyone where we all share power doesn't mean that we'll all be n00bs and godmoders. To be honest, I think that the shared power idea is great. Smaller nations can borrow off the larger nations until they grow large enough to be able to help out the smaller nations who will help out new members and so on ad infinitum.

<<Tag by Random Kingdom>>

IC: Simon Smith, the honorary President of Random Kingdom, is interested in bringing RK into your alliance. If the governing body would make the rank system clearer, he will put the idea forward to the rest of RK. Enclosed is a brief factsheet on Random Kingdom for reference.

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Nation: The Great Collective of Random Kingdom
Motto: United on the Quest of Truth and Justice
Region: The Golden Hills
Population: 1.004bn
UN Classification: Corporate Bordello (attempting to shake that off)
Civil Rights: Excellent
Economy: All-Consuming
Political Freedoms: Superb
Currency: New Credit
National Animal: Uncommon Gecko
Capital: New Hope
Tech Level: Early Postmodern Tech
----
Description: The Great Collective of Random Kingdom is a coastal nation, located on the south of mainland Golden Hills. It has a colony, Geckratonia, which is populated by mutant geckos. Fortunately, they are separated from RK by a mountain range and wall. The capital, New Hope, is a beautiful, if backwards in architecture, city filled with picturesque gardens and Greco-Roman style buildings, as well as modern plate-glass high-rises and French-inspired drapes, pavilions and tall mullioned windows. The science capabilities of Random Kingdom are great due to a siphoning of cash from all other budgets to the education budget, and a system that allows all institutions and universities to work together and donate ideas to the general public. However, the military of RK is in very poor condition due to limited funding and poor staff.
----

OOC: I will look out for the Crocodile Alliance.
Freaky. This is my 747th post! That particular model number should ring a bell...
Shazbotdom
30-03-2005, 02:09
OOC:
Jamum, When the new thread is made with the new name for this alliance; TG me.


RK, yeah, that is a little funny. Boeing 747's are teh l337!!!
Homieville
03-05-2005, 00:55
HEY Jamum remember me I have new things in my Car Storefront come see

http://forums.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?p=8520146#post8520146
Lhoell
18-02-2006, 18:46
The Government of Union Socialist States of Lhoell would like to join the World Superpower Alliance to help my country with the Defence Tech and Law Enforcement Tech.

OOC: I would like some one from here to get a TG to me to help me set up a Military Alliance and Weapons Research in my country or in their country.
Praetonia
18-02-2006, 19:25
[OOC: This is a 10 month old thread...]
Random Kingdom
18-02-2006, 19:33
The Government of Union Socialist States of Lhoell would like to join the World Superpower Alliance to help my country with the Defence Tech and Law Enforcement Tech.

OOC: I would like some one from here to get a TG to me to help me set up a Military Alliance and Weapons Research in my country or in their country.
OOC: Dude, this alliance is 1000% dead. And in a way I helped kill it by grassing up Jamum for making death threats against the mods... You just gravedug BTW, but I'm sure you don't really know what that entails.

If you want to join an alliance try the Alliances List (http://forums2.jolt.co.uk/showthread.php?t=275121) by Kelanthia. (the LWA is also dead BTW)